Aww great story!

Umm . . . Wow, that was harsh. I don't think you captured their characters at all. The way John thought about the conception of his son is appauling, and I highly doubt Aeryn would act that way. Even in the little time we see her with her son, she is a good mother.

Great story, shows Aeryn and John's attitude perfectly. Keep up the good work :)

Very Sweet!

What a piece of junk. Typical J/A shipper junk. Go peddle your ** over on TF with the rest of the shallow, shippers.