Aww! So cute!
Hehe, I like your Estel. (meaning the way you write him, not that I'm some spazz who thinks he's an OC...yeah :) He's so funny! And very realistic. ^^ Great job, I can't wait to see more!
~AN

What a great beginning to this story, I'm looking forward to reading more.

Very cute chapter; I love the father-son moments. Oh, and I'll be your Beta if you'd like me to. If not, just say so, it's no issue. ;) My E-mail is:
Kamariaelf @ yahoo . com
Please delete the spaces. FF-net deletes the E-mail address without them. ;)
~Kali

A prince as a present, ok a present and a prince all in one day. Should make a good day for Estel.

*LAUGHS* this kid is so spastic. It's excactly the way i envisioned Estel as a child. I love it how he asks question after question. And elrond is so patient with him. I would have smothered the kid with a pillow...then again i'm not an elf. Your writing in very good. I love the sortave cliff hanger at the end of chapter 1. It's a great fluffy story, but i'm sure you'll make into a serious one with chapter 1's undertone. I think it's brillant, and i luve your writing style!

I love stories with Estel and Elladan, this chapter really shows their brotherly love. Hope to see move Elladan in later chapters. And what about that "figure of a man"? Somthing is stirring...

Hi,

it's a very cute beginning. May I hope that you'll update soon?

Takes care

Wel? Aren't you going to continue? There isn't much to say, as, like you said, it was a short chapter, but this is looking like a good story so far. Keep writing!

Hey tracking rabbits is much funner then math to a little boy. Maybe Erester should have Estel adding and subtracting rabbits in his class.

nice beginning
makes me wonder what happens next
so please update soon that i may find out? *pretty please?*

Hi. Cute beginning. I enjoyed it, but why do I get the feeling little Estel is going to end up in trouble? It's not JUST because I hope so, is it? Your story is nicely laid out, easy to read and other than using 'shown' when you mean 'shone' seems quite free of word misuse and spelling and grammatical errors. The premise sounds interesting and I'm 'pretty' sure the man watching from the woods will be up to no good. Poor Estel. He just can't stay out of trouble in the fanfic world. Maybe it's because we all wish we had an excuse to cuddle him.