great story .. on to the sequeal

First off, the end. That's just mean. Seriously, this is good. I wanted to thank you for having Padme mad at Yoda and Obiwan. I've read so many fic where she just goes along with whatever they say. Even in morning, Padme would never just meekly be pulled away from her children. Great story, only bad thing about is the fact that it ended.

what!?! you mean just the end of the Chapter right? not the whole story!? right?

PLEASE SAY IM RIGHT!

if it really is the end of the whole story...NO! how could you leave your readers hanging like that?

if it isnt...please update soon :)

To ObiUber:

"AUTHOR'S NOTE: This is the first in a series of five stories set between ROTS and ANH."

Liked the new chapters.

oh no! thats it? no sequel? No! (darth vader style)

The ending made the most sense. The children still had to be hid and the couple parted. Poor Obi Wan is out in the desert and not guarding Luke.

Really enjoyed your work.

It's getting better and better.

Uh-oh. *dramatic music*

Liked the new chapter.

OH DEAR. :D

Interesting story.

so far so good
can't wait for more

Sounds so far to be virtually the same as before (except for a couple of new characters). Unoriginal and blah.

Quite a different change from ROTS, but very interesting. Will Obi Wan find Anakin? Will the starr-crossed lovers find each other? A new vader?

Off to a great start. Looking forward to more.