This is really an awesome fic, Yunasama! I enjoy the way you write with Aya's emotions!

oooooooo...i loved it _ i think you should continue :)

like i already told you, i dont know the anime, but this was very good _ on to the next ch :)

hey u need to continue it. it's really good.

i thought that the story was good , but there are still things that need to be said so a continuation would be a good thing to add or whatever. the thought or idea seems like it could be a good one but i want more!

Great start! I believe you should continue writing it. I loved how you expressed emotion, Aya-chan, and just the overall intrest held in the beginning of this fic. Keep going! _

Very great descriptions! I thought you did a perfect job of setting up the mood in this section of the story, well done!