This is a great story so far i would like to more of it :)

I thought Alonzo was black and white, not golden.

very good! i liked it alot! i hope to see more chapters! great stories !

I like your original ideas. I don't like how uncaring Old Deauteronomy is. From productions he strikes me as more concerned for every cat than you portray him. I do hope you update soon.

As of now this is one of my favorite stories. I just LOVE IT! You must post more. I'm beggin gyou!

~Tubomba! ^.^

Another excellent chapter. I didn't see a single error in there, which makes it an excellent read. All the scentences seem to flow. Great job on another fantastic chapter.

Ah, my two favorite toms, fighting. I love it when they don't get along. Anyways, I don't know why I felt the need to add a "dun dun dun" in my head at the last words in this chapter, but I did. Another great chapter.

lol This is great :D

Oh! Oh! Oh! You're using the US version of Alonzo! He's so pretty~~ *clears throat* Er, ahem, anyways...

That was very cool ^_^ I love how you did it from Tugger's limited point of view, taking advantage of having to describe the sounds and his knowledge of what the others are like to describe the scene. Pulls the reader into it more. I liked it very much and wait eagerly for your next installment!

I adore this story! I do I do I do! They are all so cute even when they are concerned in devilish situations! They seem to be in character enough to enjoy their unique personalities, but not so that they are just boring and, persay, "surface characters". You know, this reminds me of that Sherlock Holmes' story with Moriarty's right-hand-man who murdered a guy for accusing him of cheating at cards. Anyway, the voice in this story is excellent and once again I love your portrayal of the characters. Keep writing!

Sorry, I would have reviewed sooner, but, stuff came up.
Anyways, this story is just so cute! I loved how you portrayed Gus. He sounds really sweet, and, did I mention Gus was my first favorite character. Ahem, I really am enjoying your voice, the only error I saw (which really isn't that big of a deal but...) was in the first scentence where you put 'twirls' instead of 'twirled'. Can't wait to read more of this!

Oh,my. Well, that was very interesting! I love how you've included Gus in this, he never gets attention. And it's interesting how the relations between all the cats start in this fic. I love your writing style, by the way. And I have nothing more to say at the moment but the generic 'continue, please.'

I was reading through old chat logs before I started writing this, and I have to say... wow, we had some good times. And I'm not just talking about the sex. (I'm sure the other people reading this are going to be pulling funny faces at that...) Isn't it funny how we get so many ideas from our roleplay? The vampires, the neolithic tribespeople, the Empire, and now this... Brothers. Except, if I recall, in our RP one brother was somewhat older than the other.

I missed your writing a great deal, almost as much as I missed chatting with you. It's great to see something new - and since it's written by you I dont think I need to state the obvious about it being good - from you again. I just hope it gets at least close to finished.

(And in response to your email, VAMPIRES!)

Great Story!

I think he should hide and sulk and then talk to the rest of the tribe.
I especially like the descriptive diction from the beginning of this chapter. There should be more of that. The sparkles are also quite endearing.