This is really interesting. I've never seen anyone write from Celena's POV before, and it makes for a very interesting story. The Dilandau/Celena dynamics just have so much potential.

Awesome.

Oh, wow! This is so creepy. I love your description of Celena's thoughts. Will there be more chapters? I sure hope so!

I luve it! A great view of Celena- Poor Kid, I'm sure it'snot easy being Dilly's other half. Great job, this is going on my favs!

I love it! wahahahah

i have a small celena place here

. hidden wonder, also known as the celena files can be found anywhere you see the spoiler links!

come see! if you see any mistakes help me/

WOW! I love the way you portray her! I don't really get the title, though.

I liked how you portrayed Celena: innocent, but not too fragile or helpless. Very nicely written, but always remember to use your spellchecker :)

Very good! Wonderful description and feeling.

my gosh, you even included boa. neat, neat. very neat.

That was very cool. I honestly cannot think of a better way to say it. Wicked. Awesome. Well-written. *sigh* I'm in AP English and this is the best I can do? Ms. DAvis would be ashamed...Perhaps if you write I sequel, I could think of a good compliment for that? _

I loved how you wrote Celena's POV! Very nicely written, even if you say realization-pov doesn't come naturally to you. It was very well done and I commend you.

Great stuff, disorienting but very atmospheric. One small tip - please check your typing, as you seem to keep missing the ends and beginnings of small words, which doesn't help when trying to follow Celena's disjointed thoughts. More please?

Good fic I like it