Come on girl, keep writing:) This is possibly the BEST warren story out there at the moment! Please update soon.

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Hey there! New reader and I honestly loved what you did! The relationship between the two entertained me, and I read everything as fast as time allowed! Haha! I'm hoping that you'll continue, and if not, you have certainly inspired my own writing! Love your work, keep writing and imagining!

please update!

i love your story so far. are you planning on updating soon? i hope so cuz its great!

ppms!

I want more! I DEMAND MORE! (Just kidding...)
But I would really like more...please! Pretty please with whipped cream and a cherry on top!
I really like the contrasting point of views of 'inside' a mutation (Warren) and 'outside' one (Sera). It's kinda fun.

PLEASE KEEP WRITING
this is the best fanfic I have ever read. you are an incredible writer. it's like a really good book, but it doesn't have an ending! please keep writing! its perfect, but, please, you must update! soon! please? i love your writing and this story and i need more. UPDATE.

PLEASE ADD MORE CHAPTERS.

UPDATE!

please?

Out of all of the fanfictions i've seen on , THIS one was the most impressively written. I felt like I was reading a paperback novel - meaning, i felt like i was reading a real, published work, not a fan blabbing on the net.
please continue writing!

i have been waiting waiting WAITING for this update and when i finally saw that you had written. . . good LORD. okay i can't give you the review you deserve, but expect one in a day or so when i can sit down. do NOT stop writing!

LOVED this story! I really enjoyed how you have included enough 'x-men' details to keep it in the topic, but otherwise it is completely original! Update soon!

one of the best fanfics I've read since joining...perfectly paced, not rushed, great dialogue, fantastic ideas, and the characters are really believable. I've got to admit, I dislike most OC stories out there, but this one is realistic and not at all contrived. I really really hope you keep on going with this story, I think it's excellent!

btw LOVED the appearance of remy & logan. si that bar becoming a regular mutant hangout or something? cuz that would be awesome . . .

so magneto's around, eh? interesting . . .

this is the most amazing fanfic that i've ever read. you are a brilliant writer. you should write a novel or something. the characters are fantastically developed and i love the endless chapters. i also enjoy the regular switching of the POV, it really helps keep it interesting. poor warren! i'm glad he finally has someone to talk to.

i want him! so hot . . .

Your story is absolutely fantastic, your writing is amazing and I just cruised through all the chapters in one easy swoop - without stopping. You're brilliant! ♥

I can't wait to see if anything more develops between Warren and Sera (which I'm really anxious for) and I hope to see more of the wonderful Logan and Remy. The bit with Remy wooing Sera was awesome. Keep up your amazing work and I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter! =D

LOVE IT! YOU HAVE TO POST MORE!! Soon? Please? lol Love it!!