I love this fic. Even if it ends here, it has a great narrative sweep. I am really bad at remembering things to correct, but I don't recall any grammatical or spelling mistakes that stuck out to me. Thank you for the enjoyable reading material, and good luck on your future writing endeavors.

The fourth's name is Namikaze Minato. thought you mite want to know.

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Holy
crapbiscuits.
This
story
flippin'
rocks.
I'm
writing
like
this
out
of
shock
because
it
is
so
good
Brilliant
work

hury! i can't wait till the next chapter hehe... I bet in the uchiha massacre it's to get all of the arrogant pricks out of itachi's life or something like that..

JaNe and keep up the good work!

ahahaha thats really funny... great chapter

GET TO THE KILLING ALREADY! KHORNE DEMANDS A SEA OF BLOOD!

interesting story.

OK. Not quite the story update I had in mind but not bad.

Oh...so sad...but you should have just killed Mizuki...meh. Could you(when your done the massacre)continue? I want to see some fun with Akatsuki! -laughs manicaly-
Cupcakes for you!

Another chapter that seems to consist entirely of torturing characters you don't like.
Why did Mizuki tell Fugaku? and why did he think Fugaku would even care? Wouldn't the couple be more careful when and where they cuddle?
I just don't want to see a fic with a plot descend into mindless character bashing.

But it was a rush job, so I guess its all right. I

aww. poor itachi! update soon :D

Nice to see that this story isn't dead.

Awesomeness. Glad to see ya guys again. And as for the work I understand. I'm leaving for the Army on the 30th.

Poor Itachi...least she got to see some revenge on Mizuki for ruining her happiness. But make sure she gets some Ice Cream...that'll also help her ease the pain. Usually Chocolate or Cookie Dough does wonders

very nice, and I love the fact that Mizuki-teme got what he deserved.