Man the suspense is a killer. :)

I'm going to continue reviewing because I finish what I start, but the threats are getting old. Again, this part is compelling. But rushed and not enough details. What did Amy look like? What did Face amd Murdock feel about this situation. I got the angry part, you told us that...but you should show us that, with thier actions or words. Also the bit about Hannibal and Maggie breaking up was distracting. Is this going to play a part later on? If so, then maybe you should wait until they arrive at Mag's to show this...just have Hannibal hesitate, then when they get there, maybe thier conversation can explain the situation. If it isn't really going to play a part in later sections, I'd drop that paragraph.

Nicely done! The suspense is building very well. I'm off to the next one.

Now that is a literal Cliffhanger! Well, is Amy going to make it or not? I hope so, I really would love to See Amy and Face get together. A romance hint, hint.

Keep it up! love to see more :)

this is really good, I have loved all three parts of this story, can't wait to read the next part

Sarah )

continue!

I love this fic. Can't want for the next chapter. You're not going to let Amy die and you're not going to keep Hannibal and Maggie broke up are you?

Now you've got me hooked! I always like the Hannibal/Maggie angle but I'm also partial to Amy finding love within the team. Maybe Murdock will realize exactly how he feels about Amy in the light of almost losing her...

Well like I said in the other review. Don't ask for reviews just let them come ;). Thanks for the review you gave my fic btw. One little question just how do two men help another guy with two broken legs to the van? Did they carry him?

I am enjoying your story. Please continue to post the remaining chapters. Thanks.

Good job. I can't wait to see more of this.