I really love this story, update soon, PLEASE!

hey ure doin a wicked job soo update soon!for me please...(im down on my knees with hot freash tears thertening to flow)

Love your story. 1 thing that you could do is try to keep in one view not all over the place

Well this is good to read again. hope it all turns out great!

I love this story. plz update soon

Great update! Nothing I can really say here, other than that you're doing a great job with this story. Keep going!

good chapter! update soon please!

write more!! it's really good!

Please Update Soon!!

I Love The Story..Im Completely Hooked!!

OMG. THIS IS AMAZING. I hav read all the MISSING series.. and just LOVE them. I dont really like reading dat much on the comp.. but I LOVE THIS!! I read it all in one dayy.. all da chapters.. PLS UPDATEE!

im confused...

wat just happened...?

wheres jess?

Thank you for updating again! This was well written and intrigueing... It certainly didn't give much away. Nice change of pace from the other chapters.
I'm sorry, I can't say it made me laugh aloud, although I did smile a fair few times there.
Please tell me those were Jake's emotions/opinions not Jess's! Because that boy was an IDIOT for thinking that! (And, just so you know, that was extremely foul language for me. I am a devout non-swearer, much to the chagrin of my friends, and happily proceed to wack anyone who swears in the vicinity, much to the EXTREME chagrin of my friends...) But, as I said, that person's opinions were OBSCENE. Although a self-proclaimed city girl at heart (though admittedly my city's a fair bit smaller than, say, London, Tokyo or New York, with only about 1.2 million people)I can quite easily appreciate a farm-fresh egg, or a small country town! (I just hope those aren't your views...)
Jess

i liked it! very humorous :)

This chapter and this story is great =]
I hope you update soon!

Yay! Thank you, thank you, thank you! You have restored my faith in reviewing, as although I have left countless few, this is the first that has made a difference!
Sorry if I put pressure on you... When's the next chapter out?
But good chapter, if not as good as some of the others. But that's okay, it's your first in what, a year? Lol. But it's also a kind of bridging-the-gap chapter, so... that's fine.
But I enjoyed it. Next time try make it a bit more suspenseful. Also the phrase 'he’d gone unconscious' wasn't quite right-perhaps 'he'd fallen unconscious' would be better.
So well done! And please update soon...like in less than a year!
Jess