Very interesting, hope to see the end of it!

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Remember, the Plagas do not make an appearance, either in their entirety or head flail, UNTIL nightfall. Don't forget about the creepy merchant nor Krauser, for that matter! ^_^

-Uzziel-

As a matter of fact, I read the chapter of "Vortex Inducer Strikes Again!". Well, this'll be a damn shame. For the past few months, I'd been thinking that Fanfiction had unsuscribed me from you, so I kept checking your account for updates. I would've reviewed "Vortex Inducer Strikes Again!", but since I'd already reviewed the chapter with that number, it wouldn't let me. Well, at the very least, I'll miss you. Hope that whatever you do next, you're happy with it.

Aw man this blows.

Aw... Say it aint so! I've really enjoyed your stories and I hate to see ya go. If I knew anything about the game, I would offer to finish this up, if you would let me. The other thing is, I've got a few other things coming up that I need to do first.

Don't say that you will never come back, as that may give me hope that you may continue this at sometime in the future.

If this is truly the end, let me wish you Good Luck in whatever you do. Just remember, if your Muse whispers into your ear again... Listen!

please try a bit more

I really like this story

But I you can't I wish you luck in your future proyects

See you later

Great crossover with Resident Evil 4 there!
Will they encounter DR Salavador soon?

Yup... slowly getting caught up on my reading. I take it these chests of money have something to do with the game? Sorry... I know nothing about RE4... Wade says to be careful what you touch AFTER they all picked up the small chests? Not good...

lol nice action man, damn i cant get past that stupid level in RE4 lol maybe this will give me some hints on what to do? lol then again i cant really see where im going in the game anyways, keep up the good work!

Great chapter!

The evil has started...

I can't wait to see what will happen

you have me hooked up

Congratulations again!

See you next chapter

I wonder what will happen when they meet the Merchant

Not giving up? That's good.

Interesting how the villagers don't appear to have that need to feed. They've got the instinct to just kill?

Looking forward to more chapters. Later!

Amen to that, writing's good for the soul - and it makes for a healthy colon... I think. Hell, I don't know.

Anyway, I was wondering where the heck you went; I thought you dropped off the face of the earth, never to be heard from again. We may not have enough time to indulge in our pleasures, yet we must take the time to do so. That pretty much goes for anything else in our lives that we chose to participate, whether it be work, study, or anything else.

Enough preaching!

All is okay here, just be sure to watch your punctuation and perhaps mechanics... like the second-to-last sentence: "He sighed,". That should have a full stop rather than a comma. "What's the matter, are the American's scared?"; that could benefit from a question mark after "matter", but "American's" does not need an apostrophe.

There are others, but other than they, everything's okay. Keep up the work.

-Uzziel-

PS: Don't forget the pueblo's favorite bag head, Dr. Salvador! :D

Ah, an update. I was begining to think we'd lost you. Poor Leon... knowing Resident Evil, a virus outbreak is going to happen. What was their argument about, anyway? So Yori's playing matchmaker with Kim and Ron... I wonder what she'll do if she finds out Kim was infected then vaccinated... What does he mean "You Americans don't smoke anymore"? Are they by any chance working for the bad guys? Why are they ever in foreign countries? Did Ron not think of that? Who owns the house? Mad man with an axe... where have I heard that before? I think they need a few more guns... Lemme guess: the parasite, right? A lot of fighting there... Fifteen people? Not that big an army, granted, but with pain resistance... A chest of coins? Hmm... suspicious! Who killed the police? Update soon!

Actually, if I remember right, I believe RE4's main bad guy was named "Saddler" instead of Saddleris, Salazar instead of Salazer, Mendez has the first name of "Bitores", and... you got Krauser correct. And Los Plagas is actually a parasite instead of a viral infection, the parasite itself looks something like bony face-hugger from the Alien franchise.

All is okay here, just look out for punctuation and spelling and all will be better.

Later,
-Uzziel-