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KittyKittyYaoiGirl
2007-01-24
ch 1,
abuseI like. Cute. You know my friends yelled at me all day yesterday and pestered me all day today telling me to check out your stories. I have to say they were right. You have officially gained the three of us as lifelong reveiwers. I like Stories, Flicker, and Plunge. I'm not so hot on the Danny Phantom ones but I do like the ideas and execution if not the subject. Personally I think you should get into the Naruto fandom. It would mean you get more from us alot faster. I've only seen the first 5 episodes of Yami No Matsuei but you managed to get Arie to give you the first review so you must be good. She doesn't reveiw very often but when she does you can be sure that you deserve the praise. Well anyway keep it up.

Um, this is a quick request from the three of us, but mostly it applys to Arie. Would you read the Naruto fic Heading Home by Daisuke_Shadow_Kitsune and tell us of any ideas that come to yo while reading? She's allowed the three of us to have that fic but we're kinda stuck on what to do next. Onegai!! Your good and I think that you would be a valuable asset to the fic. *falls to the ground begging with Arie and Death right beside her* PLEASE! You don't have to if you don't want to but we would really appreciate it. Thank you for listening to teh crazy girl we now return you to your regularly scheduled program...
Meggie
2007-01-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseKYA! love it! definatly write more Yami no matsuei fics!! your damn good at it!
Spiritfoxgirl
2006-12-14
ch 1,
abuseLove the story! You should write more like these
HitokiriKurisuta
2006-12-12
ch 1,
abuseJust so you know, I think you write emotions beautifully. :3

Me thinks I shall also have to read some of your longer DP fics at some point, too. I've just been in a one-shot mood lately. XD
Akire
2006-09-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseAh yes, Youtube is a wonderfull thing, that's how I saw the series too. I'm reading the manga now too. I read this fic and Flicker, I like them both alot. You do an excellent job of capturing the true depths of their pain, loss, healing and love for each other. Their emotions are almost overwelming, but seem to just perfectly toe the line in your fics. Bravo. Thank you for them both.
~Akire
l-annethunder
2006-08-26
ch 1,
abuseAmazing story I've read others that do stream of conscience but they leave out details that were present in the first story, you didn't do that so THANK YOU! Oh yeah this story was just as wonderful as Flicker, like I said before please keep up the good work
Chrono21
2006-08-21
ch 1,
abuseYes, I bought the box set of YnM at best buy and have never been happier. And I was listening to how a lot of folks said that the Japanese verdion is better than the english version... I can't agree with that because I never sat through the japanese version. I'm one of those poor saps that can't watch anything unless I can understand it. *grins* I really need to learn japanese...

But rambling aside, this one was just as good as Flicker, though it took me a minute to remember that it was in Tsuzuki's point of view. Heh. The angst, the romance, the deepness. This is a fanfic that has it all. I give this my best reviews. Ever.
Loki Yamimegami
2006-08-19
ch 1,
abuseOMG! That is sjust so frikkin awesome! Ok, for a real reveiw now. Your stream of conciousness is a bit different then Ive seen it, mostly because you dont forget to include details, such as surroundings, environment... Important details.

Its good, better, trust me.

Im a horribel write so :P But I appreciate a style I wish I could master and you write very well. The sentiment is clear and the emotional baggage is enough to pull at my heart strings! Ugh, you hgave me what the anime denied me effortlessly X3 So for that i thank u!
Deaths pet fox
2006-07-31
ch 1,
abuseLucky. I want to see the entire version of Yami no Matsuei anime, but they never seem to have it in stores. Damn. Nice fic, really. And...I really, really, REALLY hate to ask this, but could you possibly review any of my stories? If you can't or don't want to, that's perfectly fine. I just...really want to know what type of writing style people like to read.

Heh. Statistics. People have only ever been statistics to me. What a shame, but I feel no guilt.

~Fox
EmoButterfly
2006-07-31
ch 1,
abuseThat was just way too cute. I love it! It's really emotional and is a much better ending for the anime! Very nice!
Much love for your story!
coco melancholy
2006-07-28
ch 1,
abuseJust as good as Flicker. Your good at expressing the core of what fans love about this pairing. Well written.

Oh, and, don't touch the dub.

Just don't.
TehMerill
2006-07-23
ch 1,
abuse-clasps hands together- This was just as beautiful as, 'Flicker'! I just got your reply from my review moments ago. I've noticed 'Plunge' a couple of times while scanning for fics but was too lazy to click on it. I now know it was worth it. xD;

Anyways, beautiful job and keep up the amazing work! ^^ -notes she was listening to 'Anywhere' by Evanescence while reading this and it described the one-shot well-
Jilly-chan
2006-07-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow...what an amazing story! You're a magnificent writer! I love yami no matsuei. And youtube kicks major **. ^^ I have the whole seires in english, i bought it at a best buy...and it was used, so it was only 27 dollars!!

Anyway, this story was very sweet, I really liked it a lot and I think you have quite a talent ther. ;)
AnimeAngelRin
2006-07-19
ch 1,
abuseaw! just as good as its companion
arcanelight
2006-07-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou did it! And so fast, too! Good job, I liked this story and how you kept it in the same style as the first. The two stories compliment each other well. You're off to a good start with your Yami fics. I'd love to see you keep going! Thank you for writing this (and Flicker) and sharing! I'm very happy you wrote this.
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