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| drgnlis 2008-08-27 ch 59, | abusebout time laura. laura + thom forever. nother chapter maybe? |
| Tohru31 2008-08-08 ch 59, | abuseOhh my! I think i squeed after reading that last chapter. and yes, i squeed, not squeeled, but squeed. my new word. i loved it! i really want you to up date it! what happens next?!?! |
| clarinetguardgeek07 2008-07-28 ch 59, | abuseas usual it is great and i love it and i cant wait to read more |
| rin916 2008-07-23 ch 59, | abuseWay to go.. it is nice to know that you are still writting on this, way to go! |
| sunniedaysmiles 2008-07-20 ch 59, | abuseAnother amazing chapter, my friend. I can't wait to purchase my own copy of "Hearts of Glass" and then show it off to people and brag about how it is the best book I have ever read. That, and I know how amazing a person the author is. Love you, girlie! -Sunnie |
| Aulophobic Clarinetist 2008-07-14 ch 59, | abusethe entire thing is on your computer? well post it already!! :) aww poor laura, having to deal with all that... oh no! she forgot clothes! :o (i'm reviewing as i read) Wes flirting = bad. thomas is way better. 4th place? very very close... Thomas and Laura! :D :) yay this chapter's great! (except Wilma's kind of obnoxious... especially towards the end :( ) update soon! update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update...please?!?!?! haha can't wait for the next chapter! |
| jazzicalbando 2008-07-12 ch 1, | abuseI've enjoyed following this story, but I can't help but point out the errors in the way the Knights are run in comparison to other real corps. You definitely have a great talent, and your writing never bores me. Perhaps what you need is just a beta to review all the chapters one at a time and work with you to make it more accurate. You do a great job with everything, but you just don't know what a real corps season is like. You can't really be blamed for this, you've never marched. PM me if you want me to help you out with this. I'd love to collaborate with you because I love this story very much! |
| Wicked Winter 2008-07-09 ch 59, | abusewow, Poor Laura. And I even feel bad for Andrew. A broken leg sucks. I've had to sit on the side lines because of it before. Haha, poor Wesley. I thought that was hilarious. Go Wilma! I'm glad I could read an update and when this story hits shelves, I'll definantly buy a copy of two. I know some of my friends would love to read this. And you know what? The wait is still worth it and I can't wait for an update. Thanks for wishing us a happy summer marching season. ((We have like ten parades to do)) |
| MusicallyInsane 2008-07-08 ch 59, | abuseOMG! yay! another chapter. I can't tell you how happy I was when I saw that this was posted. It was perfect timing because I just got finished rereading the whole entire thing and then whaddya know I look and see that chapter 59's up. yay! I'm seriously jumping up and down! Great chapter! I can't wait till you post again - from one very ecstatic reader :) |
| dutchesscourtney 2008-07-08 ch 59, | abuseYou came back so strong! (Whenever I leave my fics for awhile, my next chapter is awkward...) Is this finally a happy ending for Laura? She's been through SO much. Glad to see you back - the genre wasn't the same without you. :) ~Courtney |
| Elaine Kaelar 2008-07-08 ch 59, | abusesooner rather than later, for sure! *shakes head* that was one heck of a place to end... :P I do love Laura's epiphany... reminds me so much of my own. :) |
| musicalmischief 2008-07-08 ch 59, | abuseSQUE! THAT. WAS. AMAZING. ok. I have been waiting so long for this chapter! As always, you did a great job! :-D Even though I hate cliffhanger-type endings, that was an AWESOME way to end the story. I can't wait to see where this goes. |
| LivingBlackRose 2008-07-08 ch 59, | abuseNO!11 Cliffhangers! T-T please give me more! |
| MusicallyInsane 2008-06-30 ch 26, | abuseOne thing I don't understand is why Matt doesn't go inform the people at DCI headquarters that Laura is a girl. I mean he's not in the corps anymore and he's probably really mad at the Knights for kicking him out so why doesn't he try to get revenge by exposing the truth. Well I completely love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. I'm just re-reading it now. :) |
| Jollibee 2008-06-22 ch 58, | abuseIt took me 7 continuous hours to read this! I got hooked after my friend told me about this story. I can't believe I hadn't seen this story earlier. I'm loving it! Keep up the work - I can't wait for the rest. -Jollibee |