WHOA...
You are really, REALLY good! Um... I think it said it was a one-shot, but honestly... You should continue!! I'm sorry, I just really loved it, and I've always wanted to know how Dustfinger would interact with a little girl (considering he had two daughters...). You portrayed him perfectly! He IS my favorite character, and I think that you should continue this awesome story!

~Sarius
Incredible! Deeply impressed...

well, that sounds a whole lot like something i would end up doing, except, it wouldnt hit my head, but me belly somewhere, lol. chatter puncher

this is from an email Laura sent me after she read my prank-story...

"OH my goodness Kyra you are such a good writer! I really wish you would have pulled it off ! When I got your email I had Elizabeth come down and read it out loud to me to see if I could really tell if it was a prank. You know I really don't know if I could or if I couldn't, but man me and Eliziabeth laughed so hard! I hadn't laughed like that seens school!"

um... so yeah, just thought it would be nice to have a review from an source, if ya get what I'm saying. bye folks! ^.~

woah, thiis is way too good for oneshot. :)

Hehe, I liked it, it was a lot of fun. Dustfinger wasn't as ooc as usual. He's like, the hardest character to write, for me anyway.

Da-amn, that was Freakin' God! You know I had hoped that Dustfinger would lighten up a little more now that he's dead... ah well. Anyway, you captured everyone's beloved fire-eater poifectly. Brava!

Lets just say that it is enough to keep me interested and I shall read it again for this is your first chapter and it seems promising.

Haha!

A wonderfully done story with a nice twisty ending. Teehee. I LOVE IT!

I think your portrayal of Dustfinger was very good!

...I suppose it might be too much to ask, but... will you write more Inkheart stuff?

Please?