:cry: That was so sad! poor hiei... Will there be more?

At first, I thought this was gonna be related to 9 months somewhat. But then I figured out that it wasn't. I'm rally liking this story more and more...but then the final chapter comes and you got me depressed. In a good way..not a bad way. It makes me happy since I have't read a story about Hiei and Kurama that went from loving to angst so quickly...yet..well written. I love it and hope you keep up the good work and update the next chapter whenever you finish or start on it.

Awesome story, interesting conflict

it is nice fic, you should really continue i want to know what would hiei do!

o...darn, i like this story...you gonna continue or what? ^^ update soon?

OMG, that made me bawl... They finally decide on it and then... AUGH! This is confusing... and I still love it! I hope you come back to write more of it!

ah...that was so kawaii...i love it

I am speechless. I have no idea what to say only that I love this story. I didn't notice any mistakes, and I love this plot. I only hope that Kurama comes to his senses. Love can't be made unless it was suposed to exist anyway. Well, I hope you update soon. Ja ne!

WWA! So sad! So very sad! But angst is the breath of writing, creativity, and life itself. There is none of these w/o it wherefore I know that it was neccesary to put that part in there. I thank you for what you have given so far. Continue if you wish, for you did an exelent job.

This story is awesome. *_* It's hard to find decent stories on this site, anymore... Please continue and finish it. *sniff*

*wipes away tear* That made me cry!! U SO better write more!! For ur sake. Poor poor Hiei-chan. I love the way Yoko described him! ^_^ That was cool.

Poor Hiei!! Stupid Youko and his freakin' accurate description of Hiei!! What will happen to this 'spelled' love?? Man, now I feel depressed! But I love it!

You are doing a great job with this story, it has just the right amount of angst mixed into it.

i have to admit, when i first started reading this chapter, i thought it was kind of cheesy and almost didnt want to read it, but i really liked how you worked it into kurama and hiei's current situation. However, i still believe u could do a better job with that spell. Though i am glad i read it.

OMG!! How heartbreakingly beautiful! But I think Kurama is wrong... and Hiei shouldn't now doubt his feelings. Love is love -- it cannot be 'created' from some spell for an imaginary person. It comes solely from the heart of a REAL person.