Reviews for The Pirate Wedding

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Yanagi-sen 2008-07-02 ch 12,	abuseThat was awesome. I'm really enjoying this storyline you have going here. Thank you for sharing.
Mazakai 2008-01-31 ch 12,	abuseME ENCANTA! (which means i love if you dont speak spanish ^.^) i waited until i was done to reply and i loved this! great job! ~Max.
anna 2008-01-12 ch 12, anon.	abusehey jinjyaa ur story was pretty good though i dont think the title was entirely appropiate towards the end of your magnificent story ;)Your fanfic was enjoyable to read and pretty much cured my boredom. If you do write another story that you want help proof reading or just read, just email me ok? it seems like i dont do much anymore so i'll be more than happy to read your stories xD Oh and do write more =D for people who are lazy like me, we need super talented people like you to amuse us, if only for a moment ;]
Tati-ai 2007-08-27 ch 12,	abusereally sweet story. Gisela and Murata was an unexpected pairing, but not outlandish so I'll go with it. I could see them together Bob, Maou of earth, ages strangely. He hadnt aged a day in the 15 years between when he first met Conrad, and that thing with box. Since he probably has the same heritage as Yuuri, does that mean Yuuri could do that too? He probably couldnt slow aging to the lifespan of a full mazoku, probably just half like Conrad, until he trains a successor like Bob did. Just an idea that I've been throwing around to some fanfic writers .
Nejisangel69 2007-04-15 ch 12,	abuseAWESOME!! i loved it! can you write more?? plz?
Wiz7 2006-08-22 ch 12, anon.	abusemay i just say... wow. The depth you managed in that story! I absolutely ADORE your writing style, and I am unsure as to whether or not I've reviewed any of your other stories or the name under which I might have done so. I have read them all. And I do love them all. PLEASE pleasepleaseplease do not end this story here. I would love to see more, but then again if you're tired of it I guess I could deal. Or just keep reviewing until you decide to do more. And if you do decide to do more, PLEASE do not limit yourself to one plotline. This story had so many elements to it that I found myself guessing at all the mighta-shoulda-coulda's that led you to your conclusions ;). It was refreshing in a way that I rarely find in books these days, nevermind fanfiction. I would also like to apologize for my absence in reviewing. It was amusing and thought provoking and so much more and I should have done so many times before now. I'll try to stop prattling on now. Really I will. But you have me in almost full-blown fan-girl mode. It would be full-blown were it not so late at night. Thank you very much, and I hope to read more of your wonderful artwork soon!
Schnickledooger 2006-08-21 ch 12,	abuse1)Growing up with Phoebs-so thats why Manny's so withdrawn, eh? Evil ole hag! 2)“I love you, Manfred Lord Bielenfeld. There’s no one left to forbid us to marry. You’re not even too young for me anymore – you’re old enough that it doesn’t matter. Marry me, Manfred.” YES! MARRY HER, MANNY! MARRY HER! 3)A number of emotions chased themselves across his face, happiness among them, doubt also strong in the mix. “…Why, Cheri?” WHY?!:smacks Manny:CUZ YOU LUV HER AND SHE LUVS YOU. YA IDIOT! MEN! SO-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O DENSE! 4)Manfred chuckled darkly. “Conrad and Gwendal will hate this.” laughs along with him evily: MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Yes, they will, Manny. Yes, they will! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! 5)“Cecilie,” Manfred greeted her. As soon as they were in reach, they slapped each other on the face simultaneously and shared a hug. “Wolfram, Efram, Yuuri…”“Conrad, Gwendal…” added Cheri. “Manfred and I have decided to get married.” I love that image there. I wanna draw it X3! 6)As Manfred predicted, Conrad and Gwendal looked… dubious. They hugged both Cheri and Manfred, less than enthusiastically. What? That's it? No vehement protests and hand gestures that say "I'm gonna be watchin' you" and "You're dead"? No fainting and gasps of horror? No pure terror being struck into their hearts of vision of billions of mini Bielefields just like Wolfram running around? Dang, there's another picture I vividly see and wanna draw. I shall call it "The Brothers' Worst Nightmare"! HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE^^! 7)Shouri muttered to himself, “It’s no wonder Wolfram turned into a, a seducer of my innocent little brother, raised by a hussy like that.”Gwendal, directly behind him, said, “What did you call my mother?”Shouri spun in horror. “Ah, um… I didn’t mean…”“We should stop this before someone draws blood,” suggested Wolfram. NO! NO! DARN IT, WOLFRAM! IT WAS JUST GETTIN' GOOD! 8)Snagged by others along the way, Shouri ended up taking other posed shots while the children patiently waited under Efram’s supervision. “Come on, Frieda, you can say it. ‘Chichiue’, and ‘Wimpue’. Ch-CHU-way, u-WIMP-u-way.”Greta giggled. “Chewy,” Frieda eventually managed. “Wimpy.”“Excellent, Frieda! Oh, so you’re so smart!” Wait, so Shouri encouraged the baby to say Wimp? He's making fun of his own brother? I'd have thought he'd be encouraging slanders of Wolfram. SHOURI: to FRIEDA: Now say "Brat"...say "Sly, sneaky brother-seducing brat". Of course, it might have been Efram talking. I oculdn't tell, but that makes sense! 9)Gisela and Wolfram wandered over. Wolfram reached for Bertram just as Gisela, in lovestruck newlywed bliss, came into Murata’s arm and gave him a kiss.Bertram flamed her.“Wolfram von fucking Bielenfeld!” Gisela hissed. “You taught him to do that!” Once again, the Giesela thing never tires me^^! Wonder if her and Mura will have a kid that will join teh rest in future fics-if any said fic happens? 10)But the one Yuuri loved the best, and felt got the emotional truth down best, politically correct or not, was that first shot. Wolfram and himself, with those four children – three matching blond fire healer demons glowing to the left, and three human and part-Mazoku, of mismatched skin and hair colors, grinning to the right. Am I catching a hint that you want this pic drawn^^? Will get on it!:salutes: GAWD! GREAT STORY! SAD IT'S OVER! But looking forward to other sequels hopefully^_~! ONCE AGIN, YOU TOTALLY ROCK AS WRITER! Lurve Schnickledooger
Schnickledooger 2006-08-21 ch 11,	abuseZOMG! I'M SO SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING EARLIER! I haven't been home a lot. And uni starts back this Thursday so life is HECTIC! HECTIC! HECTIC! WAH! WHERE DID SUMMER GO?! Ahem, on a brighter note, not only will I be able to scan my fanarts for you-plugs ears to block out shrill excited screaming of author-but I'll also be taking Japanese. YAY^^! And I can practise how could I'm getting my listening to the Jap version of KKM! HAHA! Anyway, this chappie, fav parts: 1)“It’s Shinou,” said Yuuri in wonder. OMG! R U SIRIUS?!(@_@)! No, of course you aren't. He's in Harry Potter! Ahem, pardon terrible unrelated pun-_-;;. Anyway...OMG! AWESOME! I CAN'T BEGIN TO SHARE HOW HAPPY I AM^^! 2)“Alone, at last…” Wolfram said, stripping off the top half of his uniform. “Bertram, you need to control your sexy father. It was very hard to concentrate reading a story, watching you cuddled to his bare breast like that.” Wolfram dove into the bed and joined Bertram, with his head on Yuuri’s other breast. He kissed both their beautiful naked breasts, then looked up to invite a big kiss from Yuuri on the mouth. “M. I like this idea, skin to skin cuddling with the baby. I must admit, you have very good ideas. I’m so relieved that Maou-on-climax thing was Bertram. It was, wasn’t it?” Insert rabid fangirl drooling and nosebleed:X3 X3 X3! 3)“Efram’s fascinated by homosexual sex.” Lol, this one cracked me up...siriusly. ARGH! AGAIN, sorry! No really, I HAVE to see who his love interest will be in future fics. You know if he keeps up his obsessions and subtle stalkings of couples, he'll be another Gunter! XD! 4)The whole Manfred confessing at the end and Celi staying to comfort him:eyes begin wibbling:(T_T):sniffle:And to think I was so suspicious of him when he first was introduced...I'M SORRY MANNY! PLEASE FORGIVE ME! WAH! I BEAT MYSELF AS PUNISHMENT! On side note, cannot wait to see what nickname he will add to list of sons: 1)Pretty Little Vixen, 2)Fire Pixie, 3)hm...what has an "ix" in it? OK, NEXT CHAPPIE! AH! XD!
Shadowed Chaos 2006-08-21 ch 12,	abuseYAY!! its done! and its a good story, really, really good story. i love it! i love the way that you weave the OCs into the plot, and it sounds like an arc in the anime to me, which is the best kind of story that i like. betram i get the feeling remebers EXACTLY who he was in his past life. i just cant help but feel sorry for poor yuri and wolfram. and the rest of there kids are sweet as well. hmm... cant say that i feel sorry for Shori, the hussy comment about your own mother would make you go on defesive. and it was eeven better that it was Gwendal. the loveable sourpuss. :) yuuri is a good maou, he really is. i wonder, and hope that you will write more in this little series that you have going, as its fun, and its like the anime - well, most like it, and thats a good thing. i think that i'll be trying my hand at a KKM fic soon, after i get all the other junky stuff out of the way in my life. :) as for one plot line per story? let the story run where its wants to. you know the begining, you know the end. let the rest writes self with your guiance, but then again, i have yet to read a fic where the story was from A to B with out taking a detour at E, K, J and Y ect. then again, thats just me as a writer and reader and my opions. great story, now i just have to print it out and add it to my great storys folder, if you dont mind of course. one your biggest fans. SC
anonymous 2006-08-20 ch 12, anon.	abuseOk, I am now crying because I'm happy. This story makes me happy and I will save it so I can read it over and over. I can SEE the scenes. And I don't think anyone could describe or better put in context those demonic smiles. Thank you so much.
Shadowed Chaos 2006-08-18 ch 11,	abuseYAY! you updated! its good as allways. though shinou for the babys soul? wicked. why can i just see something of a one shot coming from that fact? probly as it would be amusing. th en again, maybe not. who knows. and i like the OC's, as they make the story beliveable, and there beliveable with fault and all. and i liked the coup and counter coup thing. that was great. kinda reminded me of stoffels attempts. not that they worked. as for the Alford Idea, i watched the eps again, and i gringed at how bad he was in the english dubs. in the japanses hes not that much better, but hes kinda bearable. though i always have wondered what would have happened if Al turned against them, after all... believing that the demon kinds evil for most of your lifem, then having a suden change of heart... that does not seem likly to me. and even after he got his sword back, when the red haired woman, whats her name, came up to him, the way that was handled seemed fake. so, i always thought that maybe Al was biding his time and whould try and extact revenge on yuri latter on in the series. hmm... this could fit in with that dragon insurection thing as well. Al stirring up trouble. and this could always be the thrid wedding. and scine on the topic of weddings, greta's wedding coul;d be fun to write, and i have yet to find any on the net.:( m...a hansom mazoku or human... yup, i can see her dads fretting over this. ohh... and what if the guy wasnt that awre that greta;s dad was the Maou. * sweat drops* and im way off topic. anyways, you wrote another fab chapter and i like it. please update soon. SC
anonymous 2006-08-18 ch 11, anon.	abuseThis story is one of the most beautiful things I've read. I think you write beautifully. KKM is perfect for characterization but still, I am just mesmerized at how many emotions and themes you pack in here. I cry at this story even when it's happy. I really love your writing. Thanks you
Shadowed Chaos 2006-08-16 ch 10,	abusevery good. i enjot yours stories greatly and who love it if you could write more in this domain, as you are one of two great autors in it in my opion. i myself have a few ideas, but this is your work, so i wont share unless you the authoer wish me too. i cant wait for the next chapter. m... perhaps you could do a one short or something similar of the shinuys familys first time in shin makuko. i'd love to see your take on that. keep up the good work. SC
Schnickledooger 2006-08-15 ch 10,	abuseYAY! NEXT CHAPPIE^^! So, fav parts: 1)* “I invited Efram to stay with us a few months a year. And even if we adopt Frieda, I still want to adopt Dierdra and Chichiue’s baby. And babies and adolescents are a lot more trouble than a girl Greta’s age… Are you really OK with us quadrupling our children, Yuuri? ”OHO! They're gonna start a Daddy Daycare are they? XD XD! Oh my, Oh my! Ya know, that could be another story. The toils of parenthood and the lil kiddies causing mass mayhem! DOOM! DOOM! DOOM! 2)Cheri dismounted and ran into Manfred’s arms. “I’m so glad you’re safe,” he murmured into her hair. He held her every second he thought he could get away with, then let her go and gallantly bowed her to be seated on the stairstep next to him. “Ah!” Cheri interrupted with a finger to his lips. She whispered in his ear. “I hear the mob coming. This is sure to be a circus. Can I slip into your room tonight?” “Definitely…”* MANNY & CELI FOREVER! ^0^! 3)“Uh, yes, the Eleven voted to let the Shin Makoku federal treasury pay for it all. But, since Bielenfeld cancelled the wedding –“ “What?” screeched Wolfram. “It’s not legal for Lord Bielenfeld’s heir to marry anyone but a full-blooded Mazoku, you know that,” murmured Aldrich. “We may address… alterations in the succession… next year. It’s not legal to do so again this year. LOL! I'm surprised Wolfy didn't go into his whole "Hear me all particles who dwell in flame" speech! XD! 4)“Stay,” said Manfred. “You’re my best friend, and I miss you like hell. Come home, Adelbert. Raise this beautiful little girl.” “I… Alright. Wolfram and Yuuri, thank you, I’d be honored if you could foster my daughter and raise her with me. YAY! ADAL'S GONNA HAVE A FAMILY! I think that's another reason I wanted him to raise the baby. He's got no one and is all alone:sniffle: 5)“No, it’s not that… It’s… well, I recognize this soul. The baby chose you. Both of you. I’m… pretty sure of that.” SO THIS IS WHERE THE MAOU-CLIMAX THING WAS LEADING TO TO! AWESOME! OK, UPDATE! CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPPIE! B/W words, started working on Yuuri blog yesterday and was laughing my head off typing certain parts. You'll see soon^-~! Lurve Schnickledooger P.S. Really think about the Daddy Daycare sequel, kay?
Schnickledooger 2006-08-14 ch 9,	abuseOK, sorry for not reviewing earlier. But yesterday, I kept falling alseep for hours every so often. I guess its all that late late staying up for the past months catching up^^! It was like after you ate Thanksgiving dinner and then conk out XD! Anyway, YAY NEW CHAPPIE! Here's my fav parts: 1)I have to admit that the "best scene ever in maou mode" was AWESOME, but my vote still goes to the scene I metioned before XD! AND I LURVED THE SNOW WHITE/SLEEPING BEAUTY KISS THING WITH WOLFY! AH! SO KAWAII! X3! THAT'S WHAT YUURI SHOULD HAVE DONE IN THE SHOW! 2) More Efram/Wolfram bonding! The little turd's grown on me XD! 3)Are they really gonna keep Adal's baby? o.o? Why doesn't he want to raise her? I'm glad if they do, but I'd thought/hoped for a boy ya know^^;. Maybe cuz they already have Greta. Oh well! Still time for them to learn the hard way about babies XD! 4)Gisela took one look at him, and went rabid. She screeched, “GAH! Wolfram von fucking Bielenfeld!” Gwendal and Günter restrained her bodily from flying across the deck to attack Wolfram. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH! XD! BEST SCENE IN FIC SO FAR! NO ONE CAN COMPETE WITH THE ADONIS OF HOTNESS! And loved the Murata slap thing! 5)Gwendal slapped her across the face, with considerably more hostility and relish than was really polite for the purpose. He hissed, “Marry me, here and now, Annissina.” Her face broke into a beatific smile. “Why, Gwendal! I thought you’d never ask! Of course!” And she slapped him back – hard enough to make him stagger. WOW! EVERYONE'S SLAPPING EACH OTHER LEFT AND RIGHT! HAHA! Now if we can only get Manfred and Celi to do the same:plot, plot, scheme, scheme: 6)Shori's overprotectiveness for little broo kicks in again! He totally thinks Wolfram corrupted his innocent baby sibling don't he? And Gwendal thinks the same of Yuuri! XD! Oh, don't EVER let that topic come up in conversation with those two! 7)Efram asked Wolfram, “Um, I thought Yozak was the… because he likes wearing dresses, so… does that mean Conrad’s the –“ “Pixie, you really need to get your mind off other people’s sex lives,” Wolfram answered, dunking him. When he came back up, Yuuri added, “And stay out of our bedroom!” and dunked him again. Dude, can anyone say Effie has a non-to little obsession about people's private lives. And its always two MALE lifestyles! Can't wait to see what kind of love interest he'll get sooner or later! XD! 8)Cheri gazed into the romantic sunset, everyone splashing below. “Your grandfather Manfred sure knew how to make a party boat, Frieda,” she sighed. She wished Manfred was here. DUDE! SEE! YA GOTTA HAVE MANNY AND HER GET BACK TOGETHER, EVEN IF IT'S A ONE-NIGHTER! PLZ-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z? Ahem, yes for Yuuri's blog, I've been very lazy again and have not typed a lot, even though I do not have writer's block and know what I'm doing. To be perfectly honest, I have discovered I have another new unhealthy obsession with a fictional charatcer: Robin! XD! Ya know from Batman, only I read about him in the Teen Titans section since I like him better in that category. Though, occasionally I will go to the Batman section to read about Bruce Wayne/Richard Grayson father-son bonding fics! And this all started b/c I was searching for AU fics for the Apprentice eps in Teen Titans! I am so very very slack! (-_-);;. OK, PLZ UPDATE AND I WILL TRY AND TEAR MYSELF AWAY FROM THE TT SECTION LONG ENOUGH TO FINISH THE BLOG! SO SORRY! XD! -Lurve Schnickledooger

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