I like your story. I Keep going with this. I would add this to my favorites but I've reached my limit.

I dont think its starting to sound like a mary-sue, I think to be a mary-sue it has to start out that way lol but I think you've got te captain's character well written, he was great in this chapter! dont be so ** yourself!
anyways this chappie was totally cute! lol I can't believe i just said that, I should be punished fo saying that
but anyways all in all it was a good chapter and thanks for the quick update :) keep 'em coming!

-Alj

hm... maybe a tad bit mary sue, but that doesn't bother me much. i kinda like your story. i love the romance between catherine and the captain. i think you're doing a good job with the characters. englehorn is a bit softer in the movie, but who knows? maybe a pretty girl could do that to him. your story makes me believe that one could. good work with that. i'm such a sucker for romance. and i'm looking forward to the big kiss!

i really, really like this story so far. the dialogue between the characters is well done. and the characters themselves are good, as well. keep up the good work!

total cuteness and yay for fast updates :)

-Alj

this story is very good so far. i really love a good englehorn romance. catherine seems pretty cool. i like her so far. there are a few grammar errors, but that's not as important as content, and this story has good content. i'd like maybe more description as to what catherine looks like, but even with out a physical description, she seems like a real person. and your englehorn is great. what a man. *sigh* anyways, keep up the good work!

swet, love it so far keep it up!

oh so awesome keep it going! Ha I love catherine she rocks! Up date soon!

damn she knows about skull island!?! whoop! excellent chapter and I don't blame her for not wearing make-up but she is feminine right? I couldn't see the captain with a masculine woman lol
I suppose she's got to be tough though dealing with all those men

-Alj

James huh? well its different lol thank goodness another englehorn oc :) I love them but i swear all the authors stop writing at the same time
anyways, this is definitely different and interesting, i love it so far! my only question is why was the crew shocked to discover she was a woman when the captain said 'to haul HER aboard'? I noticed the paragraph afterwards that you kept referring to her with 'they' and 'them' i just wondered why since you already stated it was a she. Its also interesting that there was a woman captain but there were women pirates so eh, why not? right :) good chap, can't wait for more

oh this is so cool, the idea of a woman being a captain, so awesome! Keep up the good work!