Really enjoyed this. If this were actually in the movie I would fastforward to it every viewing!=)

wow I'm just... speechless! Seriously, this is the best VH fic that I've ever read, really...

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!

Well done! I love this couple! So hot!

Wonderful! But isn't there red in Anna's shirt? Maybe that doesn't count because the whole thing isn't red. Again, fantastic. More?

that was really good. I think you should add more and maybe give your version of the ending for the film. One question though is that true about gypsys and the colour red on their wedding day?

hi, nice oneshot, I DO WANT TO READ MORE OF THEM PLEASE LET ME KNOW

this was cool!
i like the word ghosting. i didn't think of it in the way you did. it's cool.
this is awesome.
yours,
Nemesis91

This was really good, I enjoyed it thoroughly. If you have any others like this I would really enjoy reading them. Have a good day!

This is good! Put more up if you have it.

I am a huge fan of all of your stories, especially the soon-to-be trilogy for VH. Please do post more of your short stories. Its like a tide-over while I wait for the Circle.

anthestria

Honey, this is just beautiful.

I'm more into the darker elements of the movie, but this is still great.

If you do have more work like this, I would love to read it.

Thanks for posting, you've made my day.

Thanks,
Believer