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Anti Loqax
2008-10-29 . chapter 8
Can you please finish this story? I will like to know the ending
Anti Loqax
2008-10-22 . chapter 22
I have spent 7:00 to 11:41 pm reading all of the chapter and i do hope you update soon! PLease !
xXmoonlit sakuraXx
2007-08-23 . chapter 22
This story is really good, you should keep going!
VGiselleH
2007-07-26 . chapter 21
Sweet and light little chapter. I keep thinking it's funny that Splinter refers to Dee and Red by their real names ^_^
paulafromtwoson
2007-07-25 . chapter 21
Great job on this! I love seeing Splinter's POV. His thoughts always seem very even and observing... I really like this story!
Hack.Drawer
2007-07-25 . chapter 21
I dunno...it feels like it's dragging on too long. Yeah, yay for recovery and all that, but what's happening with LH and D? What are they going to do to find them? Is that old guy ever going to return home? Why isn't there a search going on for the other remaining turtles? Instead of being prepared and on alert, they're...frolicking. I feel like it's getting way too corny with all this bonding and everything, like they're not seriously concerned with what's happening. Eh. Then I thought I or Splinter was tripping with the arrival of the creatures... huh, maybe they stumbled upon clues? Or the grounds of the super secret mutating center? Well, hope to read more to have it all straightened out!
XxYourXxDisasterXx
2007-07-21 . chapter 20
i love the story! cant wait for chapter 21
VGiselleH
2007-07-20 . chapter 20
A calm, reflective Red who is busier with thinking than with getting angry...is the poison still in his system?? I liked this chapter, lots of interaction, and we get to learn Red's opinion on a whole lot of things. Things are good while in a bad situation. The "vertically floating stem" has me just as confused as Red though, what was that? I thought of a straw, but who drinks hot tea in a cup through a straw...?
VGiselleH
2007-07-16 . chapter 19
Oh, loved this Leo point of view chapter! Very well written, and it's so typically Leo, it was a very nice read. He's still suffering, still angry, but the happy Leo is lurking in there somewhere. And the background happenings between Red and Mikey were just adorable ^_^ I wonder how drugged Red really is though, I'm kinda hoping it's out of his system already and his behavior was genuine. Him bonding with Mikey woud be just the thing for him right now while worrying about Dee and Leatherhead. We'll see what happens next.
In The Clouds
2007-07-14 . chapter 19
Aw, a somewhat more lighthearted chapter (if it weren't for Leo. But hey, it's LEO). And I can't help but wonder about Red's POV in all of this; of course, not right now since he's little loopy...which is too bad, as he and Leo almost had some "quality time" to talk things out up there. But alas, Leo is still a drama king. XD
Good job, and thanks for updating!
paulafromtwoson
2007-07-09 . chapter 18
Wow! Another great chapter!!
The Fire-breathing-ferret
2007-07-09 . chapter 18
This fic is really fantastic! Im not normally one who likes AU fics but this is definatly the exception. I love how youve managed to keep the characters just right and its so believable how they behave.
Raph and Donny...I mean Red and Dee are just too cute! Fantastic job and keep up the good work
kytyngurl2
2007-07-06 . chapter 17
First of all: My sincere apologies! I've been following this fic for a while and kept meaning to review it to let you know that I was reading and enjoying it and that it's interesting and nicely done... and I kept forgetting. I'm really sorry about that! T_T

That said, I'm loving this! You are one of the better writers in the fandom and I love seeing your updates. :) This concept was such an interesting one, and I love all the twists and turns and unique takes on the characters you've been working in. Few do family!fluff as great as you do.

I always look forward to your updates... but don't feel rushed or pressured! Have fun, and know I'm having a lot of fun reading this. Thank you so much for this and all the other wonderful fics you've given us! We are really blessed by your talent. :)
paulafromtwoson
2007-07-04 . chapter 17
It was really interesting to see Splinter's POV in this chapter. It's pretty sad to think that he had lost half his sons for so many years... Although, I feel even sadder for Raph. The poor turtle really seems to be close to Don. I can only imagine how hard it will be for him to be away from his brother...

Great job on this!
paulafromtwoson
2007-06-30 . chapter 16
Another masterfully done chapter! Oh, poor Mikey and poor Leo... Poor Red, for that matter! So much self-blame to go around. It's nice to know that Dee isn't really as bad off as everyone thinks, but its sad watching everyone else...

Can't wait for the next chapter!
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