Hmm this ending is disappointing. I just finished 'bridges' and absolutely loved it but you had included in your author's notes that you were going to incorporate 'gluhen' in the next installments which I was not fond of so that set off alarm bells for me. I'm very relieved I peeked here and read reviews. Having just finished 'bridges' adding another person to the relationship seems so wrong. It diminishes their struggle to finally be together and I want to keep the happy fuzzy feeling so I will stop at 'bridges'. Their bond is so incredibly strong I can't imagine there being any room for a third and that's never an equal relationship. It cheapens their love. I agree with GenuineLies, there should have been a threesome or couple change warning but I've been burned before so I always check before I start reading a story.

I'll just pretend their story ended before the last chapter of 'bridges' :)

*Sigh*

didn't know how I felt about Shu at first...

but I'm more than happy with everything in the end.

Well, I´m not sure if you´ll read this review (after all, this fanfiction was finished two years ago), but I write it anyway^^

First of all: This whole trilogy is absolutely fantastic! Really, I would consider this one of my favourite stories and I reread Bridges, Inferno and Flood many many times... These stories are so well written and the way you write the characters... oh my, how can anyone _not_ love your style of writing?!

Flood was quite different to Inferno and it turned out surprisingly, but I somehow liked this, especially the Aya/Schu parts. It´s not that I´m not a fan of Schu/Yohji, but I think these two would have needed a bit more time to fall in love. I mean, of course they had some kind of relationship before and of course they are both really really lovable, but I just think that they would need more time to really get to know each other, to get comfortable with each other and like each other before falling in love... but that´s just my personal opinion^^

Beside this point I was more than happy with this threesome relationship, mainly because you took the time to show the love between Schuldig and Aya. I grew quite fond of them, and then it was okay for me to include Yohji (because of the deep love between Aya and Yohji, that is). But what really made me love this pairing was the scene when Aya said: Why do I have to choose? Why can´t we all just love each other? That was so cute and so adorable... *purrs*

Oh, and to say one thing to Omi/Mamoru: I personally don´t see him this way, but I can understand why you wrote him like that, I can understand why he might act like he did. Omi had a really horrible childhood and youth, he´s been through much pain and loneliness, so it´s only natural that he idealize Weiss as his precious family. He wants to believe in this image of a happy family, no matter what. So the relationship between Aya and Yohji kind of disturbed this image because in a relationship you always can get hurt... Omi wants his family to be happy, to not be hurt, and so he separates Yohji and Aya. He just doens´t understand that they love each other so much although they are hurting each other... probably he never experienced such a deep love, did he? So the way he acted made sense to me... and I liked the epilogue, I really did. Omi´s so lost... after all he did, he´s still a very young, very afraid and sad man. Hopefully some day he will find love and peace thanks to Nagi. Maybe then he will understand what he _did_ to Yohji and Aya...

Well, anyways, I want to thank you for writing this wonderful fanfiction. I so love this story!

I must say I cheated. I read the first two chapters of flood and found my eyebrows rising with not undue suspicioun. So I checked out the reviews and I'm glad for it, especially GenuineLies response. I adored bridges and infero, quite a bit! And I'm not inherently set againt threesomes, especially the three boys you picked (brava on choice), but I don't think a threesome in the end does this fic justice. So much hurt and waiting and now an intruder. It just doesn't seem right and is actually disappointing to witness after anticipating a time when aya and yohji could love freely at last! So I agree with genuinelies' opinion that perhaps a warning should be put on this fic about a threesome being within it. As it is, i'm glad I found out after only two chapters because such a sad ending (in my eyes) I'm not prepared for. Someday I'll come back to finish flood and apreciate the mastery of your work, because I truly do enjoy your stories and regard them as some of the greatest. But such PAIN and still yohji can't have aya to himself?! It'd tear me apart to see.

Thnk you for your wonderful efforts. I will always love your works! Just not this one at this moment, haha.

Quite frankly, I expect whatever pairing is specified to be what pairing your fic concentrates on. You made no mention of a threesome relationship anywhere, and the first two fics leading up to this were not set up to support one. Yohji kept mentioning he'd only ever loved Aya and Asuka. But now, suddenly, all this time he was harboring the love potential with Schu? If that were the case, I think it would have more in character of him to have gone to find Schuldig when Aya pushed him away. He was already self-destructing, I doubt he would have spared himself if he thought he could have had a fighting chance with Schu.

You wrote the progression of your final pairings as realistically as you could have, but it doesn't match up with your other two fics, and I would have appreciated a warning, because (and this is really just me) I don't like threesomes, and I don't find that it gave this closure. I don't see anyone as obsessed as A and Y were in your fic with one another being okay with anyone else intruding - human emotion is such that when presented with two people, a person will favor one, period, even if you like different qualities in each. I spent a lot of time reading this, and while the first two chapters were well-written, I wouldn't have bothered with the 27 additional ones in Flood.

All that negativity said, I thought you wrote this well, I found Ken actually to be specifically written well, and you wrote the progression to Gluhen, and all the angst between Aya and Yohji beautifully, which is why I'm probably so disappointed not to have any finality to all that angst.

I would request, even though you wrote this a while ago, that you edit it with a warning, because your tags make it seem like Aya/Yohji are the only canon-character relationship.

If only you would actually have the time and motivation to write an alternate-ending, I'd probably consider this a favorite.

the end.
I liked it. A lot. The whole Trilogy.
But in my opinion "Inferno" was the best story.
I'm sorry but I can't imagine Omi being so not-intelligent...

This trilogy is awesome. I'm very glad I found it. Sadly, there are not many really well-written Weiss stories around, but reading this somehow made up for that. Checking out your profile, I wasn't surprised at all to see that you study literature. You are a very talented writer - your writing just flows, there is nothing awkward about it. Keep it up!

I'm a sucker for angstfilled stories... as long as they've got happy endings

This ficlet was made a while ago, and I'm sad that I didn't catch it earlier. However, I would like to say you have some extreme godly talent, no doubt about it. I'm going to be a ** though, and say I was really angry with the way you ended FLOOD. If you added just a little more detail to the Epilogue, I think it would have made a wonderful end. Regardless, I followed this story all the way through, and you might be mad 'cause I didn't leave other comments. [SORRY!]

But all that I said doesn't matter because I stayed up till like 2 AM reading all of BRIDGES and INFERNO in a night because I was so addicted. [I know, I have no life.]
Your talent is amazing, and it would be wonderful to read another Yohji/Aya/Schu fic from you.


i adore your work, if you couldn't tell yet.

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So the toaster's name is Bob too? Wow! The ending almost had me ready to cry, poor Omi... He'll be happy with Nagi. I hope you continue to write such god fics. I also was very impressed with the titles or the Bridges arc. It had a lot of symbolism (damn, it's summer and I still think about school) I plan on reading Th Eternal One, and hope that it's as good as these. If it is, I may even read some YYH that you wrote!

I see Bob returned... I've been wondering where he went. Did he take a vacation while his home was being renovated by little Yohji? Anyway, great fics (all of them). Keep up the good work. I've stayed up all night reading Bridges, Inferno, and Flood (I couldn't sleep after Bridges knowing there was a sequel out waiting for me). I have plans all day today, and I'm not resting because these fiocs are so good! I planned on writing helpful crticism but I can't really think of anything...

*wipes tears* I knew there was a reason that I kept up with this fic...I knew that I wouldn't be disappointed and I wasn't
Your triology is novel material!I was impressed with the content and how well the different stories molded together to make this 3some outstanding and noteworthy. I compare all other Yohji and Aya or Schu and Yohji(Aya) to yours to see if they deserve my adoration and time...Hope that you have another masterpiece up your sleeve,'cos I am going to be in need of another WEISS KREUZ fix very soon!*wink*,*wink*

Hi, I'm back. Actually, I've been here all along but I figured my constant gushing over your fic had to stop so I've been 'silently' following it instead. Thanks for completing it - I would have gone nuts if you discontinued it as there are some authors out there who have abandoned their fics much to my utter dismay.
After reading the whole trilogy, I still enjoyed BRIDGES the most because of the whole 'bunny-thong' exchange. I thought the epilogue of FLOOD was kinda depressing eventhough there's no love lost for Omi.
Will you be doing MORE fics with Yohji/Schu/Aya pairings? pretty please...
I'm not fussy, whether you follow this arc or start a completely new storyline as long as AYA's character is much the same as the way you've portrayed him now - innocent in the ways of relationships.
Once again THANKS for your fics and I hope to read more of your stuff soon,

happy happy ending! i love it! X3 that was so good. you finished it in october and made us wait till april?! thats super mean *glare* but it was totally worth it. it's sad what happined to omi. except what!? no hot kinky 3-some! what?! injustice! overall, with the cuteness of bridges, the tragedy of inferno, and the anticipation and happy ending of flood, i'd have to say that, yes i very much so enjoyed it. keep up the amazing work, and i hope that you'll keep writing y/a and y/a/s because you're an amazing author. ~Cat =^^=

Parting with words of wisdom. I like it. Aya can forgive Omi, and can also...try to lead him away from the trap Aya himself fell into--no, put himself in. He still cares, even if he won't say...but then again, if he said it, it wouldn't be Aya.

This is a very satisfactory ending to your epic trilogy. I most certainly thoroughly enjoyed it. I can't wait for something else! :D I also can't wait for Stone Roses to get moving.

Keep writing.

Akira~