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Cabbitshivers
2009-05-04 . chapter 11
Oh my god! You updated and I didn't know! I swear I had this on story alert, but horrors of all horrors it mustn't have worked!

And holy hell. A ** on Quatre with the ding-ing elevator is hot enough to make my millennium certainly! Duo's yelling and the little old lady made me crack up, while Quatre's responses once again left me flustered.

You're such a tease, you, leaving us wanting with that cliffhanger. I have no doubt that Quatre has something kinky and delicious waiting for Wufei in the living room. ^_^ I can't wait!
angelus-2040
2009-02-25 . chapter 10
simply can't wait for the next chapter, hope it doesn't take two years though, your writing is magnificent and I love Quatre's reaction to everything
dimonyo-anghel
2008-12-28 . chapter 11
MUAHAHAHA Poor Duo!! ROFLMAO! Omg, omg, omg, I can't wait for the next chapter!! Will Wu and Qu ever get to do it in the ele?? Hm... is the threesome Q, D, and Wu??
dimonyo-anghel
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
YAY!! I didn't know this fic was on this site... It's on my favs on mediaminer though =D MUHAHAHAH *rereads because is unable to get enough*
gilithramaloce
2008-12-18 . chapter 11
OMG I love this chapter. The ending is hilarious. I don't know if I'm remembering this correctly or not but I feel like this chapter was different on mediaminer...if that's true I adore this rewrite. I can't wait for that threesome!! XD
reikoyazumi
2008-12-17 . chapter 11
Nitroglycerine is a vasodilator! Do I get hot costume!sex? Please?

Gods, a double bill. I'd forgotten how much I loved Trowa, but then you went and whammed me with that sex scene...Gods, woman!

I have no idea how you manage to combine sheer smexiness and lighthearted hilarity so seamlessly. GJSAFb;kjb. *Facepalms*

Okay, I've run out of coherentness, so I shall go. And await the next QuatreSmex chapter eagerly (With Duo, ohgodletitbeDuo).
reikoyazumi
2008-04-16 . chapter 2
I love you. I really do.

The first chapter was...well, hot, and then this chapter had me cackling like a loon!

I adore the description of Trowa's twitching, and the whole Duo/Wufei sex conversation was priceless.

Much love.
getaiyou
2007-12-30 . chapter 9
This is truly twisted in a degree beyond my imagination but I cannot make myself to hate this. Wufei with everyone was hot, no one can denied that. And those sweet and tender moments just makes me aches while the retelling of the past and the death of one truly made me shed tears. The agony that he must have felt for it to go to that extreme must be overly so.

You have truly made them out of character in such a subtle way that I am simply astound at the level of proficiency.

The smut scene were extremely well done. Highly detail to an extent and I appreciate that. You never know the amount of censoring there is that just enrage me.

I wonder is this is the last or will there be more?
astrakage
2007-11-25 . chapter 9
Please update this. I just found it and I am waiting eagerly for the next chapter(s).
Cabbitshivers
2006-12-13 . chapter 9
Absolutely awesome. I found this yesterday, exhausted myself laughing, holding my breath during the extremely hot parts, and imagining everything else that could happen. Then I decided I better review today because a story this magnificent and changing deserves the best review I can give.

I love the first chapter. The hesitation, the panic, the heat. The way Duo's iris's expand and his eyes darken. How you have Wufei's thoughts circulating and dancing and going nowhere but everywhere all at the same time. Their relationship seems so easy to them. A graceful concentric... so riveting.

Chapter Two had me laughing so hard I swear I've sprained something. Cruel, cruel person you are! Something hot, something funny. Then in Chapter Three, something serious.

That Something Serious was important. It added cohesion to the first two, gave a rhyme and a reason to Wufei's behaviour. I cannot fault you anywhere in this fic. I wouldn't know how. This is better than anything I've ever written.

The rest just followed on so nicely, once again alternating between heat and humour, and drama, and Quatre... oh my God, Quatre! I've never met a hotter Quatre than the one you've fleshed out. Kinky little bastard. ^_^

Now Trowa. I was wondering If you've read his Zero episode-y thingie. There's a little situation in it that is slightly vague, but understandable if you look for it, which could also explain the way he's feeling about everything. But, I don't want to change any idea's you might have for his character, because everything you're doing so far is working great. It just might be a cool idea to read it if you haven't already. Might put another twist on things.

Anyway, I hope you continue. I couldn't bear the thought of you updating somewhere else... or never... and me not knowing. Horrid. If you ever think of not continuing could you just give me a shout out, just so I don't hold on hoping?

And if you do continue... well, you'll have made my millennium.
Blair
2006-11-08 . chapter 9
Wow I really like this, I hope you're not done yet cauz I'd love to read more.
SanzoGirl
2006-10-11 . chapter 9
Very good!^^ Poor Wufei: Breathe!^^
daemoninwhite
2006-10-11 . chapter 9
Oh, that's so cute. Very different from the other chapters, much more fluffy yet serious if you follow my meaning.

And no smut obviously.

Nice chapter though. I really liked it. You needed something like this to keep the story balanced, so it didn't turn out just like an excuse to have them all do it. But hey, on the other hand that's not that bad either. :P

Very, very, very nice chapter.

DIW
Neptunesdemon
2006-10-10 . chapter 9
Is this the end? It's not the end, it can't be. Tell me it's not the end! I could be overexaggerating but I'm hoping to any and everything that there's more to this fic. I practically fell in love with it. Aw shucks, who am I kidding. I barely got through the first chapter and it was on my favorites. I'll be waiting for more. Hope it comes soon.
anissa32
2006-10-10 . chapter 9
Whew! Talk about being exhausted! After reading this chapter I had to literally catch my breath! I really thought for a minute that Wufei was not going to be coming back this time. Trowa's comments really sent him over the edge and he thought that he had really done something unforgiveable to them all. It's sad that this was just a big misunderstanding and that things had to get o this extent before Wufei was willing to somewhat listen to them and believe that he did not force himself on them. But I think that Trowa summed everything up nicely when he said that Duo should keep Wufei smiling, the Heero should make him strong, Quatre should keep him sane and that he will jsut listen. All of these things combined should help Wufei in the long run get better and get a better perception of himself. Looking forward to reading the next update soon.
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