I very much enjoyed this, and it would certainly be worth finishing. My only "constructive criticism" would be to be careful about having Kirk act too much like a tantruming 2 year old.

Hi Pat,

I am really enjoying this story. Chapter 17 was really heavy, but it is something Sarek needed to see. If Spock was forced to stay Sarek still would not have Spock. He only has Spock if Spock stays on his own. Please update soon. I am wondering how Spock is going to respond to Kirk's behavior.

Madeleine

Thankyou for writing this. It is wonderful and so recognisably Startrek as we saw it, and wished to understand it.
I heartily reccomend this story to any, reading itis an experience, and encourage the writer to continue it.

hi,

pls update soon! can't wait to read more...

caught up on several chapters today. As ever, you write an excellent Sarek/Amanda/Spock, etc story. I realized that you often write scenes instead of chapters, but that aside, I love your work and wait eagerly for your new chapters.

hoping for update soon. can't wait to see where you are going with it

Oh, I really enjoyed this one! Lovely look into the relationship of Spock and his father, as well as that between Spock and Kirk. Hope you'll have another chapter up soon!

This story is well defined and well written. I very much enjoyed reading it so far and hope that it will be continued very soon!! I like the development of the new relationship between Sarek and Spock. Mccoy is dead on in his caring attitude as always. Kirk seems to be a little juvenile, but I think that his ego is pretty big and I could easily envision him behaving this way. He might have a bit more tact before Spock's family though it might seem hard to believe sometimes. all in all I am waiting for a continuation!!

Jmvv

This is amazing: well-written, professional, and completely original. I love it, and I really hope that it is, in fact, "To be continued..."

really good story can't wait to read more

Great story! Please update soon!

So are you ever going to continue? Its annoying and im rapidly loosing interest, this is a great story so please dont ruin it by not posting regularly.

Wow! In my search for a decent Spock fic, I was very surprised to stumble on this fantastic story. You've captured each and every character in the story perfectly.

I love the storyline so far, it’s very interesting. You’ve taken these characters and put them in an uncommon situation where we get to see how they react and interact with each other when they’re pushed to their limits. And so far the behaviour of all of the characters is believable, and completely accurate IMO (it’s obvious that you’re quite familiar with the original series <3).
Also, I enjoy your writing style, it’s quite professional.

I can’t WAIT until you post Chapter 18 (I noticed that you put up Ch. 17 up on Apr. 15th, does that mean Ch. 18 will be up soon? * hopeful * Please don’t make us wait too long!)

In the meantime, I’ll check out some of your other stories. Keep up the great work!

as always, your stories set a new standard of excellence!
i read most of them,holography 1,2,3. i so love the way you make them alive, and make me understand them better.with million little colorful details.your universe is the best i have come across.

You. Have. Not. Posted. In. OVER. A. MONTH!
it's driving me crazy!