Great idea for the second chapter. Very amusing, sweet, the whole bit.

Amazing chapter, great song...heard it the other day and reminded me of House.

very sweet.

that was cute ^ ^ a little ooc, but cute, i liked it, and, lol, im listinin to that song rite now, just because :P

THAT was the BEST ending to a chapter ever (chapter 2 that is). WOW! i usually dislike slash but that was beautiful. WRITE MORE!

i dont normaly like h/w, but this was great!
i LOVE that song, 'my immortal', it was on a house fanvid so i somehow end up listening to it every time i go on the computer!
good story, well done,great fic:)

I usually really dislike House/Wilson, but this one was very well done! Great job! I love that song, My Immortal, and I think it was almost perfect for the story. Very nice...

I was a bit hesitant when I first saw the song that was introduced because it's so overused and cliched... but you've done a nice job with it. The only thing that stood was Wilson saying, “You seemed so peaceful as you were singing and yet thoroughly burdened as well…” I can't even picture anybody saying this. I mean, imagine walking up to someone and telling them that they 'look thoroughly burdened' when they X. I'd take that out and just leave the peaceful part, because, after all, isn't the running theme about House finding peace? But other than that, I really liked it!