i really love you stories mainly cause when i read them i can see them happening before me. if you understand what i mean :). not many stories does that

This story is amazing! I love it so much, and the ending was very good indeed. I look forward to anything and everything you write for Naruto in the future.

Great writing. I loved it, espcially the ending. and the Neji/Tenten.

loved it [:

I loved the story, it was very well written and I wouldn't change anything about it.

Love the ending. It was cute (:

( And the way Neji beat the crud outta the missing-nin just shows how much he cares for Tenten [; )

continue! such a cliff hanger...

aww, the cutest end ever! :D it fit Lee so perfectly to like wildlife and stuff like that :) "It's called a koala..." just can't stop smiling XD

Wow, this is really cool! I loved the interaction between the members of Team Gai!

Goldberry, no need for me to repeat, but you're my hero. I loved this story

Fantastic story! One of the best fanfics I've read in a long, long time. You've got the characters down perfectly! :)

Great! I love it. Your stories always get me thinking. :]
Oh, and your summary? Beautiful. It's one of my favorites.

Hi. I'd like to say that, in all honesty, I realy do not like the NejiTen pairing, but I saw your story one time while browsing through and the title captured my interest so much, that I couldn't /not/ read it.

It was beautiful, very well written, and they were all very in-character. You got Neji almost perfectly, and I'm happy that you didn't have him go overboard and suddenly confess his undying love for her, which many authors tend to do (in other stories I read that aren't NejiTen centric).

The plotline was very well thought out, and like you said, it all came full circle in the end. That's something often hard to do in a story, when you don't know how it's going to end or what all the details are going to be, but there was nothing 'extra' so to speak, and the ending really made me smile.

Lee's line at the end really made me laugh: "You see, Neji? Your family was wrong about Tenten. I knew the sparkle of her youth would eventually win them over!"

I'm glad you didn't go overboard with his whole 'youth' obsession. That's another pitfall for a lot of authors, especially when they use him as comic relief, and it gets stale after a while. You found a great balance though, I commend you greatly on that.

You're a really great authoress, and your writing will take you far one day. If you ever write a book, I have no doubt it will become a best seller.

Thank you again for such a wonderful read,

~Téa

Wonderful story, Goldberry! Team Gai's voices are spot on (kudos especially for writing a believable Lee!), and you weave their perspectives expertly through the story. Your plot is gripping and complete, and your narrative voice smooth and eminently readable. Adding to Favorites so I can read it again and again. Well done!

omg!! i love the suspense that u put in this story!