It's really good! Please update soon! I love it!

update asap

good story! i think you should have a chapter in murtaugh's pov.

Good. Soon update.

Really great story and its a shame its not continued =(

Oh, how will katrina act to seeing Eragon and Roran!!

Good job on the writing but a word of advice. Never expect others to giv you only gud comments. and don"t write on the condition of having enough reviews. you have a gift. exploit it.

Ok, so, it's pretty much AMAZING! Again, I have to remind myself that I'm not actually reading the book. Your writing style is close enough to the author's to make one believe they are reading the book. And he fact that you actually used the ancient language and such makes it better.
So, I love it. Please write more! I want to know what happens when they go to rescue Katrina!

Ok, u said u wouldn't update without ten reviews. Can u make mine count for ten? I've read a lot of Eragon fanfiction, and I have to tell you that yours is one of the best I've ever read. Not only does it make sense, but you portray all of the characters beautifully, with enough background in their thoughts to make the story seem real. Keep writing! Please?

wiol_ono

like it. really like it!

How can I review chapter 4 if it's not there!!? (Imagine frantic searching for it) Help!
Did you by any chance remove it, take it off for editing, or sometin like that?

This is really good. I can't wait for more!

de_bugger

Are you updating this story anytime soon?

continue please good story but stop making murtagh look evil

OMG I LUV UR STORY! upd8 asap!

Must continue. PlEASE!