Cool start. I really love alternative history (if I may call your story that way). Cant wait to read about the adventures of the female pirates.

That was good!

A great story. Very good.

This was very interesting - I'm not sure about the twin thing. But heck, I've got twins in one of my fics so...whatever!

anyway, this is very good.

Nice blending of history and fiction. Hey if Mark Twain could do it, you can too! Is there going to be any more of this? And just an opinion here...since half of Port Royal was destroyed in 1695 due to an earthquake...wouldn't that mean POTC takes place before then? Just a thought. Use it as you wish.

peace, love and lipgloss,

O, keep writing. No one I've read has ever written Jack as a pirates son, especially one known in history.