Reviews for finally and forever fallen

prettygurl0287 2007-02-19 ch 1,	abuseHey, how is it going? Your story is pretty interesting. Its cute and simple. Your detailed descriptions drive the readers to what you really want to portrey. Your good at shifting from the character's thoughts, to the descriptions of his actions or the place. Hey, keep it up. I will read your next chapters and comment on it. Good job. Yup, it was a good starter, i'll read the next one. chao =p
Asucaga Hitomi 2006-11-30 ch 1,	abuseThis story is cool and unique! I haven't seen much Asaba fic's and probably none at that matter. If they did they would make it a Bishounen. And then pair him up with Soichiro. But I like yours since you didn't. Coz honestly I dislike Bishounen (Yaoi) and Bishoujo (Yuri) pairings. But I have learned to like some. You live in the Philippines too? And that song in your account is by 'Orange And Lemons' right? The title is 'Pinoy Ako'. It's the theme song of 'Pinoy Big Brother'. I love that song. Please continue making fics. And please update this fic! I'm putting you and your fic in my fave's and your fic on alert. So update soon, okay?
Brittany Fholer 2006-10-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseI thought it was very cool. I've always wanted to read an Asaban story, but no one would ever writ one, and I think if I wrote it it would end up weird. Good! Punctuation needs a little work, though.