dude thats AWESOME!thats so friggin wicked.im a poet myself:)
keep going!

awesome,i can totally relate i loved it.it was so long and inspireing oh are you emo too?

oh my god. I loved your poem!! I read that and i could relate to most of it in all actuality.

this is your best, dear, very nice. rock on.

Out of interest, How many Alkaline Trio songs are in there? Looks like most of Crimson. Its a good choice - Alkaline Trio write awesome lyrics. Check out their other albums too, also AFI have some pretty awesome deep stuff (especially on Sing the Sorrow, and DecemberUnderground)

Wow. Just...wow! Mason that was SO good. It was really sad. Your an amazing poet! I am just stunned at how emotional and thought provoking that was. Wow. If you keep writing poems of that calebar (sp?) you're going to gain a lot of fans. That was fantastic. Sorrowful and meaningful. Great job!