Nice fic!

Your fic is like a story of a girl that was in love with another of the same gender and she doesn't know what to to the older girl, they can stay loving each other and don't pay attention to what other people say about this kind of relationship(like the mother of Hikari). Well done!

Very good, I like!

Steve Jester

Two words. LEMONY FRESH! I want you to continue this... you HAVE to... oh please? I will refuse to stop bugging you till you do...

Great ficcy!...I'm not a man of words...So I'll just say it's great...

I didn't read your fic or anything. But I dont' have anything against it. You're just about the millionth person though, who has used the word "yuri". And the only thing I wanna say is this. "Shoujo-ai" is love between two girls. "Shonen-ai" is love between two boys. "Yuri" and "yoai" are just gay porn. So don't lable your fic as yuri, unless it is, because you might not want it to be. THAT GOES FOR EVERYONE! Later.

This is so adorable! *squeals*

Awww... let me guess, this one's from your (what was it) Funky Couples Universe? (Probably forgot the correct name.) I really, really, really, (etc) like this story and I think you should write a sequel to it. But then again, that's just me.

Good fic.I find it pretty emotional.