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| Maggalicious 2008-04-17 ch 5, | abuseToo funny!! *grabs stomach* It hurts!! My favorite part was "Like, Dallas," Randy said suddenly, as if just noticing him for the first time. "BUY SOME CROCS, THEY'RE NOT HARD LIKE ROCKS. THEY'RE CUSHY AND SQUISHY AND MAGICALLY GUSHY SO DALLAS BUY SOME CROCS!" Just picuring randy and bob and the greasers dacing around in those hidious shoes made me laugh and then randy's cheer!! *starts laughing again* LOVE IT!! |
| Maddiecake 2007-06-24 ch 5, | abuse"THOSE ARE THE UGLIEST MOTHER ** I'VE EVER SEEN!" Johnny shrieked, sounding... delighted, even though he was quite the opposite. And then he began to jump up and down screaming; "GAY SHOES! GAY SHOES!" repeatedly. Non-stop. - I hate crocs, so this was wonderful ^^ |
| sectumsempraa 2007-06-21 ch 5, | abusefreakin hilarious! Especially Gay Shoes. Awesome, It was ingenious!! |
| Sparkling-angel13 2007-06-07 ch 5, | abuseHoly **, i HATE crocs. i iwhs they would die. |
| Live2Read 2007-06-06 ch 5, | abuse-reads every chapter- You friggin' RETARD. I LOVE you. Where did you get so much friggin' talent? That was ingenious (or however you spell that word). DUDE! That was awesome. -dissapears- |
| xBrokenxHeartx32 2007-06-06 ch 5, | abusewow this is the most hilarious thing i have ever read.. its freakin amazing.. i loved this chapter especially.. i hate those stupid crocs... this story is just so funny.. i love it |
| creativedreamer48 2007-06-06 ch 5, | abuseLOL! omg i hate crocs! Who wears them? their friggin ugly and anyone who wears them IS gay. Gawd, i hope a comet comes and squishes all crocs! DIE CROCS! Oh...um...sorry. Next chapter! Please? While he was doing this, Bob Sheldon and Randy Anderson walked up the driveway and struck a pose. "Look at our shoes," Bob said, batting his eyelashes at Ponyboy. "Aren't they like, totally hot?" "Like, totally?" Randy added, flipping non-exsistent hair over his shoulder. Ponyboy however, just slowly backed away, looking truly horrified. Were Bob and Randy acting gay, or was it just him? But Two-Bit however, seemed to have other ideas. He snapped his fingers and instantly, long, luxurious hair grew down to his mid-back. Flipping it over his shoulder, much like Randy had done, he smirked. "Like, totally. I mean, they come in multi colours!" Squealing in excitement, Randy, Bob and him joined hands and began jumping up and down all together. FUNNIEST. FRIGGIN. THING. EVER! |
| creativedreamer48 2007-06-03 ch 3, | abuseHILARIOUS! Not a fan of slash. I don't like the characters being gay when they're just friends. But the Mary Sue chapter was hilarious! Omg, the whole outsiders page; A new girl in Tulsa...A Soc likes her, but so does a greaser!...The Curtis' secret sister who they never knew about comes back! Gasp! God, it's just annoying. And I thank you for making fun of it. |
| zevie 2007-04-24 ch 4, | abuseThis is ridiculous. For the record, I am a huge supporter of intelligent writing and proper form, especially in humour fics. But, this is ** hilarious. SILLY SODA. AhahahHAhahhahHAHHahha. |
| Sparkling-angel13 2007-03-03 ch 4, | abuse'And Soda picked Steve up, carried him into the kitchen and fed him that soft food you feed your dog that's flavoured like different kinds of meat. It smells really bad.' and 'SILLY SODA.' made me laugh so hard i thought i was gonna conbust. LOL. god, i could practically list off all the girls people could use in fanfics... cherrymarciaangelasylviathegirlinyellowsteve'scousintwo-bitssistersandyevieonandonandon. |
| Sparkling-angel13 2006-12-15 ch 3, | abuseomgwtflolbbq i love the stories that make fun of the people who do that. seriously now, i have looked through almost all the outsidersw stuff, and at least 1/2 is about these PERFECT girls whom both socs AND greasers absolutely *munchs popcorn* love, ande she's PERFECT and PRETTY and STRONG and has a TERRIBLE PAST! oh nononono! how SAD! turns out she's sodapops twin sister or steve/johnny's little sister, or -le gasp- Dallas winston's SOULMATE! but seriously, i love this parady, it makes me laugh. OMG WHY DO SO MANY PEOPEL LOVE DARRY?!?!I HATE HIS GUTS!! |
| Sparkling-angel13 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseomgomgomgomg, i canNOT stop laughing this is HILA-*stops to eat popcorn*-RIOUS! ~Sparkling-angel |
| TinaKnightofCydonia 2006-10-15 ch 4, | abuseyou get a cookie cuz you made my day!! :D |
| k00lgirl1808 2006-10-13 ch 4, | abuseThat's pretty random... and there's nothing wrong with making fun of mary sues. It's just when you mock nearly everybody who write Outsider's fan fiction |
| fullyxalive 2006-10-13 ch 4, | abuse"**, **, **, **," Johnny challenged. And Soda took him to the kitchen to feed him the dog food as well. And force-feed him cheese because he forgot it was soap you were supposed to shove down people's throats, not cheese. SILLY SODA. LMFAO. No, I'm serious. I seriously laughed so ** hard at that part. I'm just like "GHGHJBJNJK HAHAHAHA" ^_^ UPDATE. |