made me cry

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This is the saddest thing I have ever read. Ichigo.../incoherent

I really id love the way you explored Masaki's death and the profound way it changed Ichigo. My favorite vignette was actually Isshin's, where he promised Masaki that he would make sure Ichigo would make her proud. Gosh this is all so sad but beautiful, I can't even handle it. You are so talented!

This was so sad and heart-breaking, but I loved the way you've written it.

"You can't do anything for the dead."

Very powerful words right there. It was nice to see a bit of Tatsuki and Ichigo's relationship as well. And to see that tough girl crying at the end just hit home.

This is so sad! I really like it though, cause it seems like something that could actually have happened in Bleach. Well done, your stuff's really great.

I do love your style of writing. Not to descriptive, but able to weave the emotion through the text. :]

Keep up the good work! And possibly more IchixTatsu?

wow good story keep it up

A truly powerful piece of work. I'd suggest using a bit more vocabulary in this to add a bit of spice...

but seriously, you have an amazing way with words here. Kudos on a good, albeit sad, fic.

Dak

not bad for a one-shot.

Aw... poor Tatsuki. I luv that girl. *fantasizes about possible TatsukiXIchigo, however impossible*

A great story! I absolutely adore Tatsuki in this one! So storng, yet also soft. Aw...

Beautiful story.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza