Wonderful, wonderful! I absolutely love this story! So real and natural...it just seems right.

It was amazing.

The flow was so natural, it felt like poetry, and I love the style, the perspective, everything. It's just beautiful and amazing and twisted in the Onigumo/Naraku factor.

Oh.

And OnigumoKikyou is officially, like, the best thing after reading this because it makes me feel dirty and wrong and evil and you explain that all so nicely, so prettily. :D

I love the way it is written; have I said that?

Well, I do.

The first line set it up perfectly:

"He was dirty." - The tone, the set-up, the backround info., the everything-that-is-awesome and . . . Uh?

Oh. My. GOD.

So incoherent.

I blame your fic. I blame you.

This was amazing, pure and simple.

"The dawn is a bloody red as Naraku steps into the world." - SQUEE! Love. That. Line. So. MUCH.

I can't resist: this is a fave.

So lyrical and haunting and beautifully done.

- Pixie

Okay ... that was creepy. o.O But very, very good ... me like.

...i thought kikyo was a little OOC, but that may just be my opinion. other than that, it was really good.

I love this story! It's so colorful and passionate and thoughtful! There aren't many Onigumo fics out there, so I'm always glad to see well-written one. I loved the organization and the connections! :3

That was a very intersting backstory. The way you describ his hatred and lust is incredible.

Excellent story.

An interesting view of the interaction between them and the way that Naraku was born.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

This is amazing. I can still feel those weird little shivers running down my spine from the last few lines. Beautiful.

SWEET-NESS! I loved the emotions and details! LoL! Well great work! Keep it up and dont lose it! Later.

My Soul Is Your Puppet Lea