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PerfectCell17 8/3/04 . chapter 1
*tries to imagine Veggie in smiley face swim trunks with little pink flaoties* O.O *giggles insanely* That was very cute! Poor Veggie, too short for the high dive...and for having to give Kakarot mouth to mouth when the baka was awake! Ahh, the joys of the pool! _
Mint Chips 5/23/04 . chapter 1
Slightly confusing at some parts, but it was mostly pronoun stuff - but I love it!
Setsumi-san 10/10/03 . chapter 1
*cracks up* Little pink floaties...mouth-to-mouth! XD
Leriku 7/16/02 . chapter 1
aw! its so cute! i loved it soo much!
Rissa42 6/12/02 . chapter 1
I agree - Vegeta's definitely at least 5' 4". Ah well, your fic, your rules! I LOVED THAT FIC! I'm sending the address to Vickychan - expect an extremely hyper review soon...
Tropicana 4/3/02 . chapter 1
Vegeta in waterwings...LMAO!
Fleaball 12/2/01 . chapter 1
hehehe geez, ur so evil to veggie... oh well, who cares? :-D
Darke Angelus 7/22/01 . chapter 1
...can't write...laughing too hard...weak fingers...room going dim...
Stargazer1 7/18/01 . chapter 1
OMG! LOL! My brother kept coming over saying. "what are you laughing about? Is that story funny or something?" I was like "its hilaruois!" so now he's reading it! LOL!
Chibi Videl 7/18/01 . chapter 1
HOW KAWAII! - poor vegeta-san, he musta been so embarrased! Your ficcys r the best, Chuquita chan! I die of laughter each time!
Mango Madness 7/11/01 . chapter 1
Oh Dende, that was so HILARIOUS! "AND THESE! THESE AREN'T JUST LITTLE PINK FLOATIES! THESE ARE THE LITTLE PINK FLOATIES OF A WINNER!" So funny! And I loved how everyone kept thinking that Vegeta was a kid! I think this is one of the funniest stories that you've written! *claps* Bravo!
Renee the Rabid Squirrel 7/9/01 . chapter 1
Cool
MissMagick 7/5/01 . chapter 1
hahahaha little pink floaties i couldn't stop laughing
SharonToggle 6/25/01 . chapter 1
*bursts out laughing* well, that was SPECIAL! Poor veggie... *nearly choked on skittles while she laughed herself silly on this fic* Very, very nice fic. Keep writing! *applauds*
Clover 6/6/01 . chapter 1
That was interesting, real funny too! Mouth to mouth, HA, I never thought I see the day that Vegeta would anywhere near that disposal's mouth, HA! just joking bout the disposal thing although he came be one sometimes. Anywayz, great fic!
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