 swrite 2006-07-20 . chapter 1Fantastic!
I am not usually a lover of songfics and angst stories (too many angst stories seem to be
way too overblown) But this hit the mark just right.
It works beautifully as a one-shot, but I believe it would work just as well if you decide
to continue it (please do!)
with the final words ("he was gone from the reality of Nerima") you have left open your options
giving you the possibility of another universe, a crossover or maybe a voyage thru his own mind.
I prefer the latter as I thnk it would be interesting if you had Ranma stay in the Ranmaverse
and have him find help there possibly a psychiatrist rather than the oft used martial arts
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