LOL wow it was really funny kinda hoped caden stayed with eragon arya could need some more competition(thus making her realize her love with eragon cannot be measured by time nor age but by the heart). Btw you can use the things in the parenthesis if u want =p.(give me credit plz).

come on! you HAVE to make an alternate ending or something. this is just too good to not go on!

Oh man, here I was thinkin' this could get good...Then it's funny...Then Galbatorix was stabbed in the most unlikely way...By Tyler, as funy and amusing as that was. Then they are sent home and the story ends...Personally, I thought it should have been longer...Well, now onto the sequel!

Laterz!

I don't know if you were high or simply mentally unstable when you wrote this but it lacks in several areas, or rather all areas. You have little to no plot deelo0pment, everything is thrown together as it comes to you and your characters are simply pathetic. However you did manage to make it a unique piece and if nothing else the mental image the story gave me of you is hilarious. Maybe if you spent more time writing and less time gulping down enough sugar to create a diabetic army you would have a decent story.

lmfao! U av officially made my Fave author list! I can't believe how much u reminded me of me! Lurvin da cookies, da cookies r GOOD! All hail randomness! Lol! Av u dun a sequel? Im gonna go look. This woz brilliant, and yes, Eragon is the god of sexiiness! Yummi!

Authorqueen xx

WOW! THAT WAS A BRILLIANT STORY!
yes, i know, my reviews are crap.
D.C

Lol. Galby got stabbed in the moob.

Sad chappie.

Ooh. Catfight. Interesting.

Good chapter. Who wouldn't drool over Eragon?

Funny chapter. Insomnia. Interesting.

Interesting. Lol.

That was the most hilarious story ive ever read on here! you have to write a sequel.

very random! i like it! shame its over...

very interesting story :P quite weird and ramdom just like me :D