Hi Retirw,

I love this story, I'm really like to read more and I'd like
to know how it ends. Please write more. Thanks for sharing.

This is too good of a story to let die. Please, please pick it up again. I really want to read about Tannah recovery and the other six. Please, please write more soon.

This is such a wonderful story! I hope you continue it soon. All the characters are so well drawn. I do hope that Shadow recovers himself. The difference between his initial personality and his childlike way now is heartbreaking and very well done.

I really, really love this fic!
You give a very good presentation of the historical situation. And the story is very good. I just hope that you will update soon. (Please?)
The only note that i would like to do is that "ayatollah" is a modern term of the Shi'a ( the major part who is iranian) while The assassin where Fatimide Nizari, so the title of The Old Man of The Mountain was Sheikh-el-Jebel.
Thanks,
Zindiq

I've been remiss in leaving reviews for this story. I've been reading it whenever you update and I can't wait to see how things progress with Vin with the sultan and the rest of the boys with the troops. Keep up the good work!

Wow! No tolerance there! Wonderful story! Write more! Awaiting eagerly the rest of this story!

Yes! Someone needs to get Tannah back! Good story! Wonderful plot. Excellent timing!

Wonderful! About time they got their act together!

Whoa! Tannah was a by-blow as well only his mother was perhaps not so willing? Great story! Enticing, intriguing, innovative and imaginative!

Wonderful! How are things back at the Crusader's camp? Anymore children die? His so-called friends were quick to judge him weren't they?

Woot!! Loved this chapter! So homey, so informative and inviting, so warm and cherishing. Wonderful!

You don't destroy the leader of a group and expect the group to follow you. Not the Welsh anyway.It took me a while but I finally figured it out.

You really do dislike Mary don't you? Excellent though, detestable turn in the story. Good plot device!

Totally absorbing and entertaining! The awesome factor here is outstanding! I truly love this story! Adding it to My Favorites

Excellent!! Wonderful!! Ack I should no better that not to read one of your stories! I am thoroughly enjoying this one!