Aww that was cute! I love Sasuke and Naruto friendship stories, and this one was good! Great job. ^_^

im speechless...

you make the two sound so.. connected, even though they're very

far apart in terms of friendship and relativity, complete opposites... and there i go rambling off again... xD

This made me think of all those flashbacks they extended in those anime fillers. =.- poor naru and sasuke both are so alike but yet worlds apart. D : you must really like summer as a season ... i'm scared of the sun D =. Your english and structure is quiet good as well. Descriptives used correctly.: D great job -waves at you-