Very nice adaptation of the game thus far. I've only played the game for a few months now, but I frankly think you are on the right track. I eagerly await you continuing this! Good luck to you!

~ GoldenTalesGeek

I'd just like to point out: Lina and Fia are sisters. Good story, hope to read more of your writing.

Ein couldn't remember his name. That's good. In the game it bothered me that somehow the only thing he could remember was his name. That sounds a bit wierd, right?

Anyway, a novelization. I was wondering when that was going to happen :P

Well, I can honestly say that, so far, this is the best novelization of Riviera that I've ever read (and the only one, but let's not trifle). I'm still chuckling at the 'Mr. Thief' nickname. Definately going to be keeping my eye on this one.