 blue-peridot 2009-07-29 . chapter 1aahh, lovely oneshot. very realistic, and sweet, and true. slight hints of fluff. and i liked the first paragraph. |
 JKMcGonagall 2009-03-13 . chapter 1I just found this story and I really loved it. I can see that conversation taking place between Remus and Andromeda. Their situations are more alike than not. I was slightly disappointed in Deathly Hallows that Ted and Andromeda were not all that supportive of Remus and Tonks marriage. I loved the line at the end "She threatened me." I am sure she would have carried it out too...or perhaps she did, after all, he did hurt her again in Deathly Hallows. I would love to see a story about that. I love stories that fill in missing moments.
Kay
(JKMcGonagall) |
 Youko-Kokuryuuha 2008-10-10 . chapter 1Ah, a satisfying read. Love the portrayal of Andromeda in this one, and Remus' hesitance. Good one, D.D.S. :3
~Koky |
 AliceIsLost 2008-06-17 . chapter 1another great story of yours. (= |
 Anaroriel 2008-03-31 . chapter 1Very cute one shot, I especially liked the end with the "she threatened me" lol. Nice work. ^^ |
 Lilianne-Rachelle 2008-03-02 . chapter 1andromeda seems a lot more muggle-ish in this story
or is it on purpose?...or just me being wierd aha
anyways i like nice scarcastic-ish ending there xP |
 Avindara Nirvene 2008-02-08 . chapter 1Again with the perfect ending ;)
Fabulous, with the protective-mother and accurate-dialogue :)
ani. |
 Sir Stud Muffin 2008-01-20 . chapter 1that was just adorable! in its own way of course |
 aleera 2007-10-12 . chapter 1I LOVE ANDROMEDA! lol
Amazing story!! Good job =) |
 the-original-hufflepuff 2007-10-06 . chapter 1Hehe, loved the end, and everything else really! |
 Maaat 2007-08-07 . chapter 1I like it. Actually I love it.
I like Andromeda. JKR could give her some better lines. This is how I imagine her. Noble lady with humour ;).
Great work. |
 bonniedoll 2007-08-07 . chapter 1I hate you! You're so good at writing! No, I don't really hate you... I just hate that you're so good at this! No, actually, i don't that either, 'cos if you weren't I couldn't read your wonderful stories... I am currently in the process of reading all of your oneshots, then I'm going to read A Keen Observer. ^_^ This was great, such a touching speech from Andromeda. It's a shame JK never really developed her character... |
 bograt 2007-08-06 . chapter 1as usual with your stories, absolutely bloody fabulous! |
 Duchess Winna 2007-08-05 . chapter 1I love it, especially the interaction between Andromeda and Remus. Your view on how Andromeda would see Remus and Tonks's relationship is incredibly realistic. Great job. |
 NeonFishnets 2007-08-03 . chapter 1I love it! I've been looking for a story where Lupin talks to one or both of Tonks's parents, and I found it. Hurray! :P |