 DragonRider122 8/20/11 . chapter 1Awww, that was really sweet. I like how Andromeda was so honest with him. The ending was really cute, and I especially loved the last two lines. |
 Loads of Randomness 4/4/10 . chapter 1This is a really nice story! I liked Andromeda in the 5th Book when Sirius said she was his favourite cousin. J K Rowling didn't put enough of her in the books. I always love stories about her but there's not that many good ones.
Favourite lines: "What were you and Mum talking about?" she asked as they made their way through the cheerful throng of people.
"She threatened me."
"Ah, so just the usual then."
Really really really really really good story! I also love your other stories
keep on writing!
**Loads of Randomness** |
 Diana Prallon 3/26/10 . chapter 1Oh, I loved it. And the last line! Just awesome, seems very much like something tonks would say about her mother - very much what she would do as well. |
 blue-peridot 7/29/09 . chapter 1aahh, lovely oneshot. very realistic, and sweet, and true. slight hints of fluff. and i liked the first paragraph. |
 JKMcGonagall 3/13/09 . chapter 1I just found this story and I really loved it. I can see that conversation taking place between Remus and Andromeda. Their situations are more alike than not. I was slightly disappointed in Deathly Hallows that Ted and Andromeda were not all that supportive of Remus and Tonks marriage. I loved the line at the end "She threatened me." I am sure she would have carried it out too...or perhaps she did, after all, he did hurt her again in Deathly Hallows. I would love to see a story about that. I love stories that fill in missing moments.
Kay
(JKMcGonagall) |
 Youko-Kokuryuuha 10/10/08 . chapter 1Ah, a satisfying read. Love the portrayal of Andromeda in this one, and Remus' hesitance. Good one, D.D.S. :3
Koky |
 AliceIsLost 6/17/08 . chapter 1another great story of yours. ( |
 Anaroriel 3/31/08 . chapter 1Very cute one shot, I especially liked the end with the "she threatened me" lol. Nice work. |
 Lilianne-Rachelle 3/2/08 . chapter 1andromeda seems a lot more muggle-ish in this story
or is it on purpose?...or just me being wierd aha
anyways i like nice scarcastic-ish ending there xP |
 Avindara Nirvene 2/8/08 . chapter 1Again with the perfect ending ;)
Fabulous, with the protective-mother and accurate-dialogue :)
ani. |
 Sir Stud Muffin 1/20/08 . chapter 1that was just adorable! in its own way of course |
 aleera 10/12/07 . chapter 1I LOVE ANDROMEDA! lol
Amazing story! Good job ) |
 the-original-hufflepuff 10/6/07 . chapter 1Hehe, loved the end, and everything else really! |
 Maaat 8/7/07 . chapter 1I like it. Actually I love it.
I like Andromeda. JKR could give her some better lines. This is how I imagine her. Noble lady with humour ;).
Great work. |
 bonnie-incognito 8/7/07 . chapter 1I hate you! You're so good at writing! No, I don't really hate you... I just hate that you're so good at this! No, actually, i don't that either, 'cos if you weren't I couldn't read your wonderful stories... I am currently in the process of reading all of your oneshots, then I'm going to read A Keen Observer. _ This was great, such a touching speech from Andromeda. It's a shame JK never really developed her character... |