good-god, woman, this story is absolutly amazing. Like readin a book! Cant wit till da next chaptah!

-sighs in fustration- not again... no fair sucking me in with such visual and stopping as the story is developing... -chuckles- come now how can we persuede you into continuing?

Good story so far and I do hope you finish it. This is totally different from what I normally read and I am not disappointed. Please finish this as it is well worth it.

I was thrilled to see you had written a new AVP story. I have read and reread your other stories countless times now. Your writing was fantastic before, but its gotten even better. I love the way you have designed your main character, she's real, original, has good points and flaws as well as being a likable character. I realize you have a life outside of writing, but I will be waiting in eager anticipation for your next chapter!

Your preface has roused my interest, and this story promises to be a treat. You have aptly described in the beginning of this fic how human desires may bring destruction even to those whom they belong to. I think I hear tribal drums ;) Is Sheyn going to rescue the captive?

This is a really good story. Please update and quick!

you have to hurry up and get another page in!im dying to know what happens next, oh,and the story is great!

I Loved it when will you write more? Please PLEASE WRITE MORE! I hope to read more soon luv Grim

I like Sheyn, a lot. She's a believable, well written character. I enjoyed the section where she wondered about her ability to kill, a thing I think is missing from a lot of aliens/predator fic...humans, unlike the predators aren't built with the hunt in them, and they often have moral delemias about killing. It was nice to see it mentioned.

Your writing style, as ever is smooth and a pleasure to read.
I must read more of your work! :)
Added to my favourites

so are you planning to post the next chapter any time soon? i've been waiting for such a long time. ><
anyways, i was just doing my daily checking on your stories. hopefully you could post your next chapter soon.

So is Sheyn going to be spending time with the humans or with the Predators?

veary good i liked it alot and when is the next chapter coming out ?

This is a really good story. I'm glued to my screen, can't wait to read more!

You should really update more often! All your stories are good and always leaves me hanging to read more! *cries* please with a cherry on top?

Aw the good part was comming up! please update soon.