I like your story, not seen many like it, original plot and such.
Even though the telling sometimes gets a bit confusing and there are a lot of spelling mistakes, but it's not all that serious.
I just have two questions:
Since when has Sylvanas had blue hair? and
how the heck can her child be a night elf when she herself never was one?

I just love your story. It is nice to read it. At the beginning of the story i was a little bit disappointed, because it starts like the most of other storys. But at the third chapter it begann to be very very good. I love your style of writing and the style you discripe situations and emotions. I had my difficults with reading the story, but i think this is so because english is not my native language, because i'm a german. So sorry if my english sucks.^^
I hope you keep on writing because i want to read more and love more of your story.

PS: Don't be to disappointed of the: "It's cool" or "Wow good story" rewies. Many people couldn't discribe things in an other style like this: "Cool" or "Own". But as you can see people from other countries can discribe things cooler... erm better. So i wish you good luck by writing the next chapter and hope that you will get many good ideas. Mhmm I wonder if i will give you a rewiew in german next time ;p but i just don't know now. so let you surprise.^^ And just remember i will be waiting for your next chapter

THis is a good story, i really like how u did the horde chars, especially Varvisa. But whos Sargeros, is it Sargeras. For some reason i think u should introduce a dragon coz they are the safeguarders of the world and should be there when something like this happens. Another thing is that all the druids have been night elves, not a single tauren or keeper of the grove.

good story but why are all horde evil?

I love it keep going. Some grammatical errors, such as keeping you wrods on the same line (ex. onthesameline). Other than that I love it and I would like you to continue if at all possible.

So far so good, keep up the good work. Good cliffy to.

Shiros, 60 NE hunter of Frostmane

OMG! Don't stop. I am so curious now...you're driving me insane I want to read the rest of it. When will you update?

OMG! that was so totally awesome! do you have an account...email me and maybe we can hook up!

Nice story so far. I hope we'll see more soon.