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StarfireGreencoon
2008-05-01 . chapter 1
Great Story so far
liteonit
2007-01-03 . chapter 1
Awsome i really like it cant wait for the next chapter
akaikoX
2006-11-18 . chapter 1
I love this story, when is there going to be another chapter?
Celestial Indigo
2006-10-24 . chapter 1
This is an excellent story that I have read so far. I also like how you went back and started a prelude for the series here. The length is great with the neccesary elements to keep it interesting. Good matchup too (R/N). There aren't many of those that stretch out for long and I hope you keep writing this story.
Bobboky
2006-08-14 . chapter 1
interesting, i wonder if Nabiki is the will get posessive or not
Bluedragon81
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
A very good start here and I hope you are able to get the rest of this prequel done soon.

The only problem I spotted in this chapter was Nabiki's use of the word ‘Anata’ when walking up to the disguised Ranma. Problem here being anata is a word that is only used by a female referring to her husband or boyfriend. And with Nabiki being disguised as the ‘guy’ I can't see her making that mistake, Ukyo may be, but not Nabiki.

Keep up the great work and get more done for us soon please, I still want to read more.
DCWestby
2006-07-28 . chapter 1
Looks good.. Hopefully the rest of the stpry starts soon... Good writing.
keichan2
2006-07-23 . chapter 1
This chapter, and the others that will be following, are really welcome, because chapter 4 of "Love of a Cheetah" had really created interrogations that needed answers!
Now, about this chapter, particularly, I LOVE IT!
Please continue both of those stories.
Upgrade
2006-07-22 . chapter 1
Nice to find out what happened back then. Now for the rest.
kuroko
2006-07-22 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story, especially because it explained some things about the most recent chapter of love of a cheetah in which you revealed that Ranma had been sleeping with Nabiki which seemed to come out of nowhere
DragonGolem
2006-07-22 . chapter 1
Very good indeed. Someone wrote that the tone of this story was different than "Love of a Cheetah" and I have to agree. Not that that's a bad thing of course and I can see why it is. In the original story all of this has already occured while this one is exploring what has become common knowledge. You're doing a very good job with both stories. Please keep it up!
Dumbledork
2006-07-22 . chapter 1
WOW. Brilliant. I simply love it. Can't wait for the next prelude chapter.
Tai Khan
2006-07-22 . chapter 1
As for Lemon... this first part is about as explicit as it's ever going to get. Later parts won't be.
Ahye
2006-07-21 . chapter 1
A well written piece of work. I found myself hoping (as always) for Ranma and Nabiki to become a couple. My only real complaint is that this piece has a markedly different feel to it than 'Love of a Cheetah'. That's not necessarily bad, just different. Also, this runs very very close to being a lemon, which isn't allowed on ff net. I love a good R&N story, and would hate to see this get yanked for that reason.
Innortal
2006-07-21 . chapter 1
Well done as always, and looking forward to more.
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