I lovrd it

AMG MANG HURRY UP AND MAKE THE NEXT ONE! I need to know what happens next :p

Is that it? Is this the entire story? You should add more.

Cute! ^_^ And kupos! Haha I loved the moogle thing. Very funny.

*snicker* Sexy Zexy has-(laugh) a diary!! Ha!! (laughs hysterically for about ten minutes before passing out from lack of oxygen)
Wow, I loved that! It was so cute!(chuckle/laugh again) Zexion's scared of moogles! And Roxy has a secret moogle dealing place!
Great story! The last line is really depressing, but the first half of said last line is so sweet!!

wow! i didn't know you had a fanfiction... well the chapters were short and i was able to read the entire thing in under 5 minutes but it was a great story... could have been a one shot...

Best Larxene/Axel story I've read so far =] Very nice job, I lovves it =P

AH
THIS CAN'T BE THE END! WAS SO GOOD! MUST KNOW... wait, i know what happens, i read the KH:CoM manga (cry for me, the poor girl so unfortunate as to not own a Gameboy Advance and therefore no CoM...)
...hehe, HOT kiss... nice dramatic last line there
Its neat how you can transition between RPG and story format, nice combo there

teehee, ROMANCE ENSUING! NEXT!
ha, the moogle thing was really funny, soo great
I can't wait for DDR... i rock at that game :P

cute chappie, but once again short...

GAH! so short and yet still amusing
If you can't tell by my name, I adore moogles, so I'll be looking forward to this ~evil laughter~
...KUPO!

hehe, cute but short, decently written where you can actually UNDERSTAND what is going on (rare in many fics XD); will continue on reading, good work!

awesome story! ^_^ please update soon! ^_^

-RubberDuckiesWhoLikePieAndCake

the stori is so CUTE! keEp uP thE gOoD wOrK! =)

aww, the romance was kinda sweet! i wish i had GBA to play CoM... well, great writing, and the moogles CRACK ME UP! (plus i actually love the KH moogles, so that just made my sick-stay-home-from-school-and-read-fan-fics-on-internet day ^_^)

once again, funny talented writing, but a little quick, you still get your points across though, the romance idea is amusing and draws readers in, good writing, like the simple RPG style at end