Oh, I like it, very nice.

You should consider writing a sequel to this one, becuase it kind of just leaves everything open ended.

Very well written little fic, nick would undoubtably find 428's more than difficult, but knowing that the only way out is to tell someone who he hates to disapoint what happened to him. This oneshot really shows the emotional turmoil of considering such a decision

GOOD SHORT STORY I ALSO READ WHAT A BEAUTIFUL MESS AND THAT WAS JUST GREAT. MAYBE ADD A COUPLE MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS AND I WILL READ THEM THANKS!

aw wow thats so good. Its a different twist. *Thumbs up*

I like it. You know Nick is stronger than he gives himself credit and will be able to help those kids better than anyone else.

Hi there...I loved the chapter. Very well written.

really good, i enjoyed it!

I liked it a lot