Aw!
Cute. Great chapter :)
-She had to figure out how to put her emotion into words that her mother could see time zones away-

Mothers always seem to know what you feel :P

Go Mac!
Great chapter - again :)

-“Oh, and Danny…” Mac called to him as Danny began to leave. “I’m expecting a shout out in the wedding toast.”-

Haha, nice reference to chapter 3 ;)

At first my heart broke, then Lindsay came, my shipperheart jumped, then I broke the silence in my house and laughed.
Poor Danny.

They're really mean ^^
Actually I've seen this one: -Watching a vegetarian being told she just ate chicken-
It was really sad

Great chapter again, I like how you wrote Aiden.

Great chapter again. And so true. The more you love someone, the more you hate him :)
I can really see Stella and Lindsay having that conversation!

By the way:
-The more you love someone, the more you want to kill ‘em. Loving and killing fit like hand in glove!-

Danny's and Lindsay's hands fit perfectly too :)

-I must be smart And hide my heart If she's within a mile If I don't duck I'm out of luck She'd kill me with her smile. Kill him with her smile, if she hadn’t already. Sid and Marty would have fun at his autopsy. ‘Yes, how did he die?’ ‘Heart problem, it was already weak from love then she smiled, totally did him in.’-
ROFL

Omg that really made my day.
I loved this, very nice job with the lyrics. I normally don't like songfics, but this really suited the story well!
Great job!

I would love to see this on the show. not that its ever going to happen but it definitely would be fun

ha ha! OMG THAT WAS GREAT! lol that was so funny lol! well done!

bit confusing as i don't know any of the songs, but still a great story!!

Hehe very cute loved this whole story!

absolutely brilliant! if only they would this in real life... reminded of buffy's once more, with feeling episode. hope you do another one, focusing on the other characters (hmm... mac and stella?)! kudos for such great plot and style! :)

Never seen La Cauge Aux Falles (sp?). Good one tho

Spamalot! I don't really think it should have been used after Aiden and Louie and Flack, but I still love that show. This is pretty good.

Haha Aiden would be the Gary comparison. This one probably fit best so far. I'll keep reading

Okay keeping the Asian accent in the song was not a good idea, but other than that good. Comparing Lindsay to Kate Monster was awesome