Your chapters always suck me in and away :)

I am rooting for Ari and Dean :)

Wow Brooke. Sadly humans always place the blame on the blameless.

“Sounds good to me,” Dean said while deliberately not looking over to watch Ariel fix her hair. He had made that mistake on the way over here and nearly hit a squirrel.

Straightening slowly whilst staking her pool stick on the dark red laminate floor and leaning into it like a pole, she raised her eyebrows into an amused expression. “Why on earth would I do something like that?”

Love those! Really shows who Dean and Ari are :)

You sure do know how to drag a reader in :)

I like how you mixed up the girls for the guys. In every story the badass girl gets Dean and the sweet girl gets Sammy :)

Poor Dean, always getting in trouble with the ladies...

Liking it so far :) Great start!

O.o LOVE IT

Really really awesome story the twists just kept on going, i truly enjoyed and cant wait to read the sequel!

I am so glad that this story is completed! So far it's been very good, a few errors in tense, but that's just me being picky!

I must say I enjoyed the first chapter! This is just the kind of fic I was looking for.

sorry about the lack of reviews. i've been just reading through all of it. but most take a break now at work.

so i love how both siblings don't think its a good idea for dean and ariel to be together, even though they're pretty much perfect for each other.

and i love the story line.

oh. i like how they all knew each other in different ways. nice.

loved it cant waite to read faited