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elohcin
2009-11-13 . chapter 8
Your chapters always suck me in and away :)
elohcin
2009-11-10 . chapter 7
I am rooting for Ari and Dean :)
elohcin
2009-11-10 . chapter 6
Wow Brooke. Sadly humans always place the blame on the blameless.
elohcin
2009-11-10 . chapter 5
“Sounds good to me,” Dean said while deliberately not looking over to watch Ariel fix her hair. He had made that mistake on the way over here and nearly hit a squirrel.

Straightening slowly whilst staking her pool stick on the dark red laminate floor and leaning into it like a pole, she raised her eyebrows into an amused expression. “Why on earth would I do something like that?”

Love those! Really shows who Dean and Ari are :)
elohcin
2009-11-10 . chapter 4
You sure do know how to drag a reader in :)
elohcin
2009-11-10 . chapter 3
I like how you mixed up the girls for the guys. In every story the badass girl gets Dean and the sweet girl gets Sammy :)
elohcin
2009-11-10 . chapter 2
Poor Dean, always getting in trouble with the ladies...
elohcin
2009-11-10 . chapter 1
Liking it so far :) Great start!
SmearedRedTearDrops
2009-06-15 . chapter 1
O.o LOVE IT
Mrs Cullen-Ackles
2009-02-15 . chapter 18
Really really awesome story the twists just kept on going, i truly enjoyed and cant wait to read the sequel!
bloodredcherry
2008-09-29 . chapter 3
I am so glad that this story is completed! So far it's been very good, a few errors in tense, but that's just me being picky!
bloodredcherry
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
I must say I enjoyed the first chapter! This is just the kind of fic I was looking for.
winchesterxgirl
2008-09-27 . chapter 7
sorry about the lack of reviews. i've been just reading through all of it. but most take a break now at work.

so i love how both siblings don't think its a good idea for dean and ariel to be together, even though they're pretty much perfect for each other.

and i love the story line.
winchesterxgirl
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
oh. i like how they all knew each other in different ways. nice.
xX Runz With VaMpIrEzXx
2007-12-23 . chapter 18
loved it cant waite to read faited
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