Oh I Really love this story Please update soon this is really great
Hugs ;) Ginny

MERRY CHRISTMAS

that was so great! i was thinking while i read this how much better it is than the show, because the show has no inner dialogue and feelings, while this does. it's what makes a story so much better than tv!!

there was a riddle in there? oh God... i don't think that i can find it. but that was great, and i can't wait for the next chapter!

*raises hand* i feel just as confused as danny! that was great though...those were really good nightmares. update again soon!!

there were some spelling errors and repeating of words, but that didn't take away from the story at all ^^ i loved it! i bet it's going to be just as great as the first one!

Like Danny, I too found this moment to have familiarity to it when in occered. I hav good expectations for your your and look forward to it.

OMG U R a Kewl author,if U find a place 2 fit her in,U should put Danni in2 the story,somehow,SYL.

I reread the first story and just discovered this one. I hope itll be as good as the other. in the A/N, I'm not sure I understood what you meant by 'this is the twist I decided to make in this story before I trashed the original beginning'. I still love the rythm of the writingstyle you create that makes things so vivid. I'll review when I can. We're sure to enjoy your writing in this current stoy.

Lovin' it so far!

Whoa. That was REALLY weird. You lost me, and now I'm gonna have to beg you to update so I can find out WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON?!?!?!?!

XD

great beginning! and in the first paragraph, what is wuthering? lol. also, the second time spectra speaks, in like the 25th paragraph, u said light twice in a row. just letting you know of the few finer mistakes :) otherwise, it was really good. cya!

Excellent start! =) Just like in TSTIR, you introduce the chapter beautifully, describing everything without exaggerating or being excessive.

I like the way you handled this chapter. The 'partnership' between Spectra and Vlad was written naturally enough, so it doesn't seem rushed. Sure enough, both of them are manipulative and calculative.

And you also suggest a very interesting matter with Vlad's character: the fact that he feels betrayed. He wasn't afraid of his secret being exposed. He was furious about her alliance with Danny; that she switched sides. But, what really irks him the most it that, even as calculative as he is, he didn't give that outcome much of a thought. Like you said: he overlooked it.

Well, I can't wait to find out how they'll get Jazz into this and how they'll make her join them. This promises to be a very interesting fic =) Great writing as always.

Good luck!

-Lou

YAY! The sequel! I wanted to start it yesterday, but my internet was freaking out. Anyways, This story is already turning out to be totally awesome! I can't wait to see what this new found alliance and the upgraded invention does to Danny. Man, you are a master at making me want more of the story! PLEASE update soon! ^^

You did a prety good job with the characters, but I thought Spectra was working for Vlad? You made it sound like they barely knew each other, but then, I'm not sure if they DID work with each other in the first place...
Also, the last word, DANNY! Vlad always calls Danny "Daniel." ALWAYS.
By the way, did Vlad use a ghost wail, or was he just screaming?
See ya soon!