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Allan pike
2007-09-19
ch 1,
abuse*stars at screen blankly* 'random so random'
Jazzzymine
2007-08-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseomg!

I luff it! :D
Unices
2007-07-23
ch 1,
abuseWow! That was good, but way to 'fluffy' as my boyfriend would say. Hilarious! lolololol! Could you try doing more chapter stories? the plot tends to be better when you write those.
bakagaijin
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseI dunno... I kinda like it.
YourAngelStandingBy
2007-05-17
ch 1,
abuseAw, Hinata is so cute! She fainted at the sight of Naruto's butt!

Cute story! ^_^

-Angel
Kane Shi Megami
2007-02-21
ch 1,
abusewhy, even while unconscious, she had a happy, and somewhat demented smile plastered all over her face.

IF this is post time skip Naruto, I'd think we'd ALL havet hat smile on our faces. Passed out or not XD

Very cute.

KSM
allicat
2007-01-22
ch 1, anon.
abusetalk about dying happy,lol, 2 funny
MissShannell
2006-12-26
ch 1,
abuseWoah. You might haave recognized me? A fan from youir Shikamaru and temari fanfic. Well this story was...sorry but wierd. I just could NEVER imagine Hinata being SO PERVERTED! With a DEMENTED SMILE? Dang. Totally OOC. I don't like OOc. Sorry, but you should read my review for the shikamaru and temari fanfic. You can tell I'm picky right? Well check out my review for THAT story.
Purple Wasabi and a Panda
2006-12-01
ch 1,
abuseAgain, love it. And funny! Good job with keeping the characters in character.
Naruto: HIT ME BABY ONE MORE TIME!
Lady Dusk -Raku-
2006-11-01
ch 1,
abuse*falls out laughing* Pointless but awesome XD
Thank you for fulfilling my pointless fic of the day.
Kira Shino
2006-08-24
ch 1,
abusethis is great now if someone even says her name i'll probibly start cracking, cause i'll remember this...u have a great imagination, u know that?
ScarsOfTime
2006-08-19
ch 1,
abuselol awesome, very funny :)
NutBuster
2006-08-04
ch 1,
abuseAhaha, poor Hinata. And you're right. It's the right idea, but at the wrong itme. Hahah, geeze, Naruto. But more of poor Hinata.
Platinum Egoiste
2006-07-30
ch 1,
abuseNosebleedy sweet. :)
TheUA
2006-07-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseLol...he hee funny... poor Hinata
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