I DO like this chapter!! Update soon!

I'm liking this. Update soon!

I enjoted this! Update soon, please!

The story is very interesting so far, and I like how you portray Jack. Please update soon! ;)

sry i couldn't contact u thru messaging but if you red the next chapter of my story you will understand better, okay? okay.

I love this fic! It's really good! Oh thanks so much for reading mine it means alot! Please update soon!

oh good story! you really kept jack in character, which is something i have to watch. *sigh* but good story anyway, keep it up. i really like Evelyn.

Can't read all of it right now but I love it so much so far. Keep going, luv. ;)

Kelsey

His name's Marty. Please please please update soon.

His name is Marty.

It seems interesting,it had a good start can't wait for more.