Ohh.. Me likey. If you ever wander back to Trinity Blood (it seems that you are more into Naruto) I hope that you will write more Cain Abel fics or oneshots.

Ananas.

Cain is still very...Cain ! well-done !

Wow, that was magnifacent. You should do more of this... especially more Cain and Abel interactions. You seriously did a wonderful job. I got a question to where the answer is probably odvious. But when Cain told Abel that soon they will be one, does that mean that Cain is going to take Abel's body or somehow have Abel at his side as an enemy to all that he once held dear? Anywho wonderful job on a magnifacent story.

Wow... Just-wow. This is one of the best TB fanfics out there. I really do hope you will write a sequel to it-it would be a shame not to. Your writing style is really great-detailed and lifelike...

Clower

Great job, nice details. This has a great, consistant 3rd-person POV, that's pretty hard for most writers to maintain. So, at the end, Abel drank some of Ion's blood? That woulda been cool to read. But great job, the anime left the ending with way too much of a break. Keep up the great writing!

Sapphire

Wow, this is wonderful. I like how you've detailed everything to set the atmosphere of brokenness and redemption. This is brilliant work, the CainAbel hints just heightens the story, in my humble opinion. Good job!

Wow...this was great. You used alot of very good description.

NO MORE? PLEZ WRITE MORE! I LOVE THIS STORY!

Plleassee continue on with this work! :D

WOW.

am glad i stumbled across your fic. always wanted to see moments of the two brothers together, just them. you managed to capture their beauty, broken, bathed in blood and feathers. i like the way ion found abel in his sort of Krusnik form, and that he was there to mend abel's injuries [which i suspected was the main reason behind the novel's author putting them together post-great war]. besides, i prefer ion as abel's company to that annoying good for nothing little nun.

great work. i sincerely hope you'll write more toribura, with abel and cain as the centerpiece even better.

This is a wonderful story. I deeply enjoyed it. Excuse me.

*runs into a corner and buries her face in a pillow to muffle her cries* HOLY WOW! THIS WAS AWESOME!

I usually don't use all caps, but this wonderful story drove me to, I swear it. The description of their pain and the emotion and the surroundings...it's all breathtaking. This story leaves me with phantom aches because your description was so good I could feel the agony you described.

I've just finished watching Trinity Blood, and I love how you covered what happened when the two of them fell. So Abel fed on Ion to heal himself? Ew...and cool.

Very nice job!

-Alaena

hay, this is good! I like it good job _

oh. Interesting. I look forward to more. I'm new to tb, so I'm not sure who everyone is, but I love it and I've been looking for some good, serious fanfiction. hope ot see a new chapter soon!

very kool, very very kool

this is very well writen, i didn't pick up any grammar or spelling mistakes and such a rich description!

very well done

I love it! Are u going to make another chapter for it? Please do!